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for This is Not a Game [Complete]

by JaydenNara

person Anon
schedule March 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So now we know some of the history for the Uzumaki boys. It's seems pretty harsh for Naruto, but I was beginning to wonder if it was worse... maybe some form of kidnapping and molestation that caused him to be so distant. My mind was putting poor Naruto through some kind of ringer.

Can't wait to see Sasu break down some walls.
schedule March 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
considering the prolog....i'm not entirely sure i want to keep reading to find out how they came to that point... not unless they get rescued or something at the end. The story itself is interesting, i'm jsut not much into torture. :P
schedule March 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
you know that movie where that boy can suddenly understand what the animals are saying... and the dog asks "can I have a cookie? can I have 2 cookies? no wait...can I have 10 cookies?!"

that's what I feel like. can I have one chapter? can I have 2 chapters? no wait...can I have 10 chapters?!

*sigh* I've been reduced to begging like a dog.

I really love every word of this story.
person Jezabel-Swan
schedule March 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Bloody Hell Naru, just give in to the sweet delectable boy, you know you want to for christ sake, he's gorgeous, and stuff rules, since when have you ever obeyed them anyway!
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As you can see, I like that chapter VERY much, and would kindly wish for Naruto to strip Sasuke and have his wicked way with him!
FANTASTIC STORY!!!! Love it!
schedule March 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aw Sasu-chan! That big meanie Nawu! And it was all getting good too! :cries and holds up a plate and spoon: MORE PLEASE!
person lintis
schedule March 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I've been enjoying this story greatly, high school drama with something extra to it, yum.
Thank you for updating so often, it always makes me happy to find a new chapter :)
I was wondering if Sai is going to appear in person at some point? He's probably my favourite character in the actual Naruto-series<3

I really like the way you've written all the characters, especially Naruto for some reason. Also Sasuke is cute when he's not the bastard one is used to :) And Kiba and Shikamaru too, such a cute couple.
Thank you for writing the fic and I'll be waiting for the next chapter ;)
schedule March 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really love the relationship between the Uchiha bros., they're always there for eachother. I loved the little talk they had about Itachi's date and Naruto's appt. I wonder if Sasuke will bring it up to Naruto when he sees him.
schedule March 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yes!!! Some action!! I love when there's a rival for love and affection or in this case, fortune and fame. It will be fun to read Kisame trying again with a better plan to get Sasuke. That was great!! They just can't seem to convey there feelings to eachother. Hopefully they will have another chance soon.
schedule March 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Buuuuuu! Uzumaki don't go!
Sasuke was wonderful! This was the best chapter! I'm glad that he gave him a hint.
person nivell
schedule March 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aww, Kisame's the bad guy? But I love him! Lol, hopefully, he isn't too much of a bitch in here. Love the latest chapter!