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for This is Not a Game [Complete]

by JaydenNara

schedule February 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was exciting!! Alot happened! I can't wait to see Itachi's date and how adorable he'll act. I thought Naruto would take Sasuke with him to see Shika but duh I guess that would lead to giving the agents away.LOL!! I just loved Naruto's Valentine's gift to Sasuke. I also loved how Sasuke seemed to melt in Naruto's hold, I was kinda wishin something more may've taken place between them.^^ Yes!! Kiba asked Shika to be his, that was awesome and funny as hell!!! I can't for the next chapter!!!!! X3 Oh yeah!! The buzzer on the locker was hilarious!!! I cracked up!!! XD
person alex
schedule February 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
touche. u make a good point. i thought u were just being a dick lol my apologies
person alex
schedule February 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ZOMG!! ok FIRST of all... HOW THE HEC DOES SASUKE NOT WAKE UP?! lmao secondly... ZOMG SHIKA NOOOOOOOOOO!!!! thirdly... oh man poor naruto. things r startin to get real serious... im so excited keep'm comin!!! more chappies plz
person alex
schedule February 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh and ONE more thing
alienx... WTF r u talking about? geez harsh much. its a story AND a darn good one. good authors r so friggin hard to find. ur thinkin too much, expectin hardcore realism. its a story not a biography
person moodysavage
schedule February 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I was soooo cheering for Sasuke when he threw that stupid Karin out. GOOD for him standing up for himself. It's about time those girls get intimidated by an angry Uchiha lol. But Shika!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm glad to see Kiba admitting his feelings at least to himself & others but does this mean Naruto is personally in danger or Sasuke who he's watching? Argggg...I want more!!!

This is so good. I love love love this story!
person Jen
schedule February 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh... looks like things are getting serious now. I can't wait to see what Orochimaru has planned. It's good that Sasuke is becoming more confident now; it wounds like he'll need it...

Hmmm... while I do really enjoy this story, I think AlienX has a point about how compromised Kyuubi and Naruto have made themselves (and their organization), thanks to the latest chapters. Undercover cops, for instance, would never introduce their marks to other undercover cops, let alone a giant party full of them. It's also problematic, from the perspective of an undercover agent, that Kyuubi has quickly gotten himself into a real relationship with Itachi. I expect Kyuubi and Naruto's behavior to end up biting them in the asses big time.
person smint45
schedule February 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was fantastic!!! Poor Shika has to be shot in narus case!!! But I really love this story and I can't wait to see where this will go and what happens next!!!! See you again soon!!!
schedule February 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yeess!!! The action is here!!! This was an exciting, scary chapter. I'm glad for Sasuke's improvement and Shika's recovery. I can't wait to see more Kiba and Shika.^^
person meowkuu2
schedule February 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wooo!!!!!!!! that was awesome!! I was scared that Shika wouldn't make it and wow go sasuke!!!!

I patiently..ish.. wait for ur update!!! ^_^
schedule February 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Uh... this fic is like wonderful but slow torture. I love every chapter and I am always left wanting more... like an addiction I just want more as soon as it wears off. LOL