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February 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love these characters. We have gotten to know all of them and it's so fun to read about them. I wonder if Gaara with remain alone? Offhand I can't think of anyone to pair him with.
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February 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was great!!!! I'm so happy Naruto starts to feel again!!!! I really hope that the scene fom the first chappy will end well!!!1 I want them to have a happy end!!!! And I want the Uchias to finally find out what the usumakis are so that this secret is out of the way!!!! Please update soon!!!! See you!!!
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February 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
LOLOLOL THATS gonna go over great. Protective parents LOVE when you don't come home, don't call, and have a hang over. LOVED this chapter. Shika & Kiba need to get with the program!
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February 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
gosh this story rocks... I'm always so excited when a new chapter goes up. Drunk Naruto & Sasuke were just so cute and hilarious. I like everything about this story and the pacing of the story is just perfect.
I haven't tried to guess where the story is going because I like to be surprised. lol however sometimes I do laugh at myself and say that this story has it all... all that stuff that teachers try to teach kids to do for a good story you just do naturally. The characters and their personalities are introduced really well with the story and plot interwoven in. And the plot progression is fantastic. I can plot the rising action points and see how they are building the story lol.
You really do have a gift for story telling.
Once in awhile there will be a subject/verb agreement thing but those really don't matter much at all to the flow of the story and only once in a blue moon is there a wrong word choice (those stupid homonymns of course.)You had one of those right before everyone yelled SURPRISE as they waited with "baited breath." Should be "bated."
Course who am I to talk... I spelled "a lot" as "alot" till my professors pointed it out and I still have the worst grammar when I talk.
If you ever write a book someday...I want to read it!
I haven't tried to guess where the story is going because I like to be surprised. lol however sometimes I do laugh at myself and say that this story has it all... all that stuff that teachers try to teach kids to do for a good story you just do naturally. The characters and their personalities are introduced really well with the story and plot interwoven in. And the plot progression is fantastic. I can plot the rising action points and see how they are building the story lol.
You really do have a gift for story telling.
Once in awhile there will be a subject/verb agreement thing but those really don't matter much at all to the flow of the story and only once in a blue moon is there a wrong word choice (those stupid homonymns of course.)You had one of those right before everyone yelled SURPRISE as they waited with "baited breath." Should be "bated."
Course who am I to talk... I spelled "a lot" as "alot" till my professors pointed it out and I still have the worst grammar when I talk.
If you ever write a book someday...I want to read it!
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January 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... I can't remember if I reviewed this yet. Either way, I love it!!! I can't wait to see what happens next or until it gets to the action. Just for the sake of it, I re-read the prologue and it literally made me shudder. That has never happened to me before.
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January 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
LMAO!!!XD I laughed so hard with the pretense. I could just picture Naruto and Sasuke making up stuff and giggling hilariously into their hands, arms and/or pillows whatever they could find. Then picturing Sasuke as a 'cuddly' drunk and then scrambling around trying to knock a chair over for 'effects' I just cracked up. This whole chapter had me rolling. Please update sooner so we can get back to the fun of the party. I can't think of where this is leading, except maybe a possible kidnapping attempt or maybe a spy for Orochimaru will slip into the party or something. I can not wait another day but I guess I'll have to,lol.
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January 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I totally love this!!! And I have absoloutly no idea where you are going with this!!!! But I love this story still!!! So keep on updating and see you soon!!!
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January 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Really fun story!
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January 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
There are so many endless posobilities! Honestly your's is one of the few I am NOT speculating on... mostly because I just enjoy the suprise of what a new chapter holds. For a second there I really thought the boys had started the party early and were getting snuggly. LOL my heart breaks for Naruto... its not that he doesn't WANT Sasuke its that he won't let himself have the boy because of his goal to destroy Orrochimaru. I really worry that whatever develops between them will get destroyed. I don't want Sasuke to believe that Naruto wanted him to get to Orochimaru... not for Sasuke. *sighs* SEE now you made me speculate and I'm sad... so more party please its hilarious!!
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January 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So sadly, this is my first time ready your fic. Plus side I am soooo in love with it. *squeals* It's been a while since I've gotten this excited for a new fic. With the characters, the stroy, the writing style everything, love it all. Keep up the good work and keep the chapters coming. I will also be sure to review with each new chapter, after all everyone (though some deny it) is a review slut ;p