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for This is Not a Game [Complete]

by JaydenNara

person Zeph
schedule January 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome. I really enjoy reading it. Can't wait to read how Naruto and Sasuke will react to Kyuubi and Itachi being in a romantic relationship.
schedule January 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ooooohhhhhhh!!!!!!!!! Kyuubi and Itachi in the theater were so sweet!!!!!!!! It was perfect! You perfectly described that awkwardness when you're just getting let someone know you like them...worried whether they like you the way you like them... planning out how to make first contact...not remembering anything else but the other person...kisses and touching...sooo perfect : )
schedule January 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter! Poor Naruto and Sasuke. It's not going to take long to discover that their brother's hooked up. LOL For some reason I can imagine Sasuke being seriously pissed... no idea why. Thanks for sharing! I'm excited for the next chapter.
schedule January 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have a suggetion, UPDATE SOONER!!!!!
Yes, seems like a very reasonable suggestion to me. In all seriousness though, update as often as you can even if it's only once a week or maybe even less than that. But if you could update sooner than that, it would make this fangirl very, very happy!!!! ^^

~nekluvshp
schedule January 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Omg!! I do most of my reviews via my phone cuz I'm at work or on the bus or subway. I just wrote a long review and did'nt get the captcha right so it went away, talk about PISSED!! LOL!! So I'm rewriting. Ok, I really enjoyed this chapter cuz of embarrassed Itachi, who is adorably cute especially when he was dazed by what Kyuu said.^^ I can't wait to see him fight in the next chapters with the war, love watching him and his hair looks loose.^^ Then, I forgot Naruto has issues too and glad he and Sasuke straightened it out. Next, I forgot that this was going to be a dark fic and reread the prologue and was abruptly reminded of that fact,which scared me a bit for the future chapters. I honestly can't wait for the action but I'll be reading with trepidation as I fear for their lives remembering the torture Naruto seems to go through. Lastly, I missed watching Shippuuden by a couple days and did'nt know what u meant. That episode was hilarious and after they fell in there was a heart shaped splash, I cracked up!! Remember the cute little butt shot at the end? Hilarious!!! XD
person loveusender
schedule January 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was so sweet! The interaction between kyuubi and itachi...I'm excited to know the whole story with Naruto's virginity.
person Jezabel-Swan
schedule January 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
And Naruto SNAPS! Brilliant, so quick, so darkly emotional, I can see the darken of the plot, and I like it!!!
I also found the KyuuIta scene very adorable!!! Can't wait for more!
person smint45
schedule January 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Again this was great!!!!! Itachi is sweet when he is shy^^ They are so cute together!!!! Please give us more Orchimaru action soon!!!! I want Sasuke and Itachi to find out who the usumakis are!!!! See you again soon!!!!
schedule January 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
More, more, MORE!!!! *Craves to kno the story of the brothers and couples.* MINNEEEE!!!<3
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schedule January 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love love love this story...and I'm all ready to write my gushing review...and then I read that A/N ...seriously? omgoshhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!! I have to find it! I'm late to Naruto and I'm still on the original Naruto...I haven't gotten to Ship.at all! I'm never going to sleep...must...search! Oh...and yes... I ADORE this story!