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for This is Not a Game [Complete]

by JaydenNara

person meowkuu2
schedule December 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this update makes me happy!
I look forward to more mew -^_^_
person Nivell
schedule December 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aww, I think I'm going to like this. Sasuke will need someone to protect him and Naruto fits the bill. Do I see a sense of bitchiness from Sasuke there when Neji was eyeing his man?? LOL, can't wait to see the next chapter.
schedule December 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I start to get really into it like ready for what's coming next and it stopped. *offers you a tray of freshly baked cookies in various flavors as bribery* I baked them myself. :)
person Anon
schedule December 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Damn.. I was wondering who would catch who's wye first. I was right, it would be sasuke first haha XD
I could just imagine the steamy session between them. Awe sasuke should really give naruto a chance. Liking it so far!
person LupineCub
schedule December 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hello Heard your looking for a beta, I wouldn't mind being yours beta for this story and others :)
schedule December 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Forgot to log in >.< As i said before i wouldn't mind being your beta for this and other stories :)
person Jezabel-Swan
schedule December 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well, This certainly looks very interesting!! Nice flow on from such a dark prologue!
I'm a NaruSasu fan so I hope it's that and I always find stories where Kyuubi's human very fascinating, can't wait for more!!!
person Jen
schedule December 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Def. continue! This is pretty interesting with the spies angle. Also with Orochimaru's connection to both Naruto & the Uchihas. And of course I want to know who the mysterious "other" agent is, and watch Naruto maintain his professionalism at NOT get involved with Sasuke. ;)
person smint45
schedule December 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I totally love the beginning of this!!! And the prologe was so fantastic!!! I really want to know how they got there!!! And how Naruto comes to feel again!!!! And what happend 4 Jears ago!!!! Please update soon!!! I totally love this story!!!! See you!!!!
schedule December 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
between your tease and chapter one I'm VERY excited to see what's next!