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for This is Not a Game [Complete]

by JaydenNara

person Anon
schedule February 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ooooh yay a friend from within :) there is hope after all! im still trying to figure out... WHO THE FUCK BOUGHT SASUKE???!!! TOBI???!!! lol man this shit is too exciting lol well... not the naruto getting tortured part. thats not exciting ar all lol it makes me wanna cry... poor sasuke, im surprised he isnt broken, poor kid. his parents murdered, he's kidnapped, his boyfriend's tortured in front of him, he's been sold like property... poor poor kid. keep up the good work. im glad you make updates at least once a month. some peopple either arent as dedicated or just simply die. good job, u, good job ^_^
person Princess Sin
schedule February 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
who could it be that wants sasuke so bad? for some strange
reason sakura keeps popping into my head. could she be the
one that had sasuke kidnapped. but no, she wouldn't/couldn't
be that stupid. could she? i can't wait to find out.
schedule February 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So glad you updated this. been itching to find out what's gonna happen.

small note, though. you dont use "oh" before fifteen hundred hours or nineteen hundred hours since that would make the time 015:00/019:00. skip the "oh" for any times from ten in the morning (10:00). it's a bit confusing system for those used to AM and PM instead of 24-hours clock.
person smint45
schedule February 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Finally an update!!!!! I'm so happy!!!! Thank you so much!!!! So Sai isn't hte bad guy^^ Thats great that they have some help down there!!! I hope they will be able to get out there alive!!! See you again soon!!!
person moonprincess90
schedule February 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!! I <3 this chapter!! I'm so glad you got it out! So Sai maybe helping them?! I hope he can save them, yet I have this eerie feeling the only way he's going to be able to seek him out is when they take Sasuke to the buyer. Naruto won't want that, but Sasuke has the tracker on him so they could track Sasuke. Its going to be falling on Sasuke and Sai to save Naruto. At lest this is what I think will happen. ^_^ Thanks for chapter! I can't wait to see if I'm right.
schedule December 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
WOW! OUR POOOR BOYS!!! I really do love your work I hope you keep writing. What will happen? I'm pretty sure the one who paid for Sasuke is Tobi. Will they save them in time? or will Sasuke get taken? If Sasuke dose get taken and goes above ground to leave LEAF will have the looc. for Naruto and he may get saved. Oh so many ways the story can go. I'm looking forward to reading it so much. ^_^ Thanks for the great story!!!!
schedule December 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
By the gods your a GREAT writer!! I've spent 2days reading this fic. I'm almost caught-up. I love this fic! the pairing, the style of your work, are wonderful. Keep up the great work.
person smint45
schedule December 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay you are back!!!!!! I'm so happy!!!! I really hope Kakashi will find a way to find them!!!! But Naruto is holding up great so far!!!! I so can't wait for more!!!! Hope to see you soon!!!!!
person Teagan
schedule December 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh!! >< How cute is little Sasuke all shy and embaressed about Naruto! I just wanna pinch his little cheeks, lol. Im sooo very muchly enjoying this story! Its three in the morning and I refuse to stop reading, lol. Love it! Keep it up! Incase it dosn't tell u since Im a newb at reviewing on this particulr site, Im up to them having coffee and Nar dropping Sasuke at home.
person Teagan
schedule December 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Naw! Itachi is the cutest uke ever! (Assuming he is, in fact, the uke.) What a fucking cutey! And an an an an and, gah! Just, ah, shutting up.