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August 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story and even if it is more graphic on torture or other abuse you have given warnings. Not every story can just be fluffy happiness all the time. I personally like how much depth the story has and it seems more real to me.
Hope to see more soon and i hope this encourages you to write and get past your wrighters block.
Hope to see more soon and i hope this encourages you to write and get past your wrighters block.
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August 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was a fantastic chapter! You couldn't even tell that it was shorter! I'm really exctied for what's to come in the next few chapters!
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August 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I don't know how I feel about Sasuke!torture, but I'm honestly all for whatever Naruto!torture you can dish out. XD I liked this chapter, but it was definitely more for furthering the plot than for anything else. I am really anxious to see what Orochimaru's plans are. It'll be great to see what happens. :) Update soon, please!
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August 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was fantastic!!! I really love this story!!! I so hope LEAF will rescue them soon!!! Please update soon!!!
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July 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAA!!!! Damn it, Sasuke! (growl) And so, it's starts! Can't wait to see what happens... I know it'll be brilliant. ^_^
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July 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh Boy!! I liked everything about this chapter. I like how Itachi knows what kyu n Naru really are and still loves them both. I love that he also knows of Gaara's real status. I love how this is the beginning of the darkness of the story. I am so scared for what is about to happen to S'uke and Naru. Will any of the other agents get hurt or killed? I can't wait to find out Orochimaru's reason for wanting Sasuke and if Kisame's really gonna get Itachi like he thinks. I hate that Sasuke was almost rescued then he decides he'd follow Naruto's instructions only to turn around n follow his own instinct, what a doof.:d
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July 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I was screaming at Sasuke by the end of this chapter.
I greatly look forward to your collaboration. You and AngelTailon are great authors, and I can't wait to see what you two churn out.
I greatly look forward to your collaboration. You and AngelTailon are great authors, and I can't wait to see what you two churn out.
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July 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
awesome chapter once again.... i loved everything about it.... now i cant wait to see what happens when sasuke and naruto are taken back to Orochimaru.... please update as soon as you can
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July 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, can you NOT do anal penetration as a form of torture? Because that basically means rape. I wasn't aware of this poll. Can you do an Author's Note (as a separate chapter so it shows up of the Latest Stories list) with all the options in the poll so people can take it? Because I would definitely vote NO to anal penetration as a form of torture.
Other than that, good chapter. Interesting to see how you resolve the statutory rape since it's a very serious offense - regardless that Naruto and Sasuke are in love with each other.
Other than that, good chapter. Interesting to see how you resolve the statutory rape since it's a very serious offense - regardless that Naruto and Sasuke are in love with each other.
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July 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was just amazing!!!! I so can't wait for more!!!! The suspense is killing me!!!! I want MORE!!!!! Please update soon!!!! See you!!!
P.S. Itachi took the truth really good ^^
P.S. Itachi took the truth really good ^^