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June 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Where's the rest of the story? I was really enjoying it. :(
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July 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I do love this story and especially Kakashi in this one. But let me offer some constructive criticism. (btw, I didn't read the pervious reviews, so forgive me if I restate something someone else said) I was more confused than Sakura in Chapter 2 about what happened. When it was mentioned that they brought back Sasuke's blood and I realized he wasn't at the party, I believed they had killed Sasuke and that's how they got his blood. Then when it was mentioned that Sakura was on a mission against the Lightening and Sasuke was involved, I thought somehow Sasuke had defected to them. Even at this point, I'm not entirely sure how Sakura got from Lightening to Taka. And who gave her the poison? Lightening or Karen? I'm guessing it was the Lightening who raped her, not Suigetsu. And did Sasuke kill Suigetsu? I do know that Juugo was the one who caused the miscarriage.
It's all well-written, but just lacked a bit of clarity.
It's all well-written, but just lacked a bit of clarity.
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May 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow, great plot, awesome skills, cant wait to see how everything plays out
&& i agree, there should be more REVIEWS
&& i agree, there should be more REVIEWS
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March 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Why does this not have more views?
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December 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes. I am QUITE snagged and want MORE.
Thank you!
Thank you!