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January 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
really enjoying both aspects of the story but it does seem like sasuke and naruto don't really have a story line, their just going back to something that is familiar that doesn't have any hope of a future. So basically their part is just sex.
Still I like this story, I'm a sucker when it comes 2 school fics
Still I like this story, I'm a sucker when it comes 2 school fics
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January 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ah. Hell no! As hot as the Neji/Gaa is, I say continue with the Sasu/Naru! Good chap (now that its all there ;)...)love the jealousy and thoroughly amused at seeing Neji and Sasuke squirm (insert evil cackle)! Keep it up, looking forward to the next installment =]
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January 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ok what just happened?o.o Keeping secrets much? lol. This is really interesting.
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January 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Neji is coming undone while knowing he may not be able to have anything special with Gaara. My poor Neji.
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January 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
well well looks like that lil info on naru and gaara got two boys wanting to work overtime and rethink everything they thought or made promise to them to change if they want them for themselves. can't wait to see how this works out for naru and gaa-chan.
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January 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love this! I suppose there's no chance of them ending up in a foursome?
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January 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ahahaha... Sasuke just had to prove he was worthy of the title...
Your spacing needs a bit of work, too much is lumped together, it also makes it hard to read when its a huge paragraph
overall its really good though, hope you continue, it looks like it would make quite an entertaining story
Your spacing needs a bit of work, too much is lumped together, it also makes it hard to read when its a huge paragraph
overall its really good though, hope you continue, it looks like it would make quite an entertaining story
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December 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start. Lol. I do hope to see more soon.
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December 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ya know I don't think I would mind dentition if it were Sasuke in charge. Only Naruto could handle him. hahahaha Panning more soon? I wanna see more Naruto and Sasuke. * Evil Face*
This was awesome. *nods* Now I shall return to wondering around and reading, So I may procrastinate more and avoid writing. It's so sad when the muses kill over in a gutter, not even poking them with a stick helps. Meh, you wouldn't happen to have this up on Y!Gallery would you? I would so fave it over there. XD
Okay sorry I've had to much coffee. lol And now I'm just blabbering.
This was awesome. *nods* Now I shall return to wondering around and reading, So I may procrastinate more and avoid writing. It's so sad when the muses kill over in a gutter, not even poking them with a stick helps. Meh, you wouldn't happen to have this up on Y!Gallery would you? I would so fave it over there. XD
Okay sorry I've had to much coffee. lol And now I'm just blabbering.