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September 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story so far! I hope there is more eventually. :)
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March 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story so far!!!! I'm happy that they are finally back to talking to eachother^^ i hope some smutt is coming up soon^^ I really wonder what happend between Itachi and Shisui... Hope to hear from you again soon!!!
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December 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
:D
I genuinely adore this story. It has just the right amount of drama, suspesne, hillarity, character development, plot and smut to keep me thoroughly entertained and hooked.
Your writing style is lovely and flowing. I've been with left with lots of gorgeous mental images. :D Itachi is possibly my favourite character here. It's wonderful to see him take control, but the less dominant parts of his character are also enjoyable. I also appreciate the feistiness of Naruto, it makes for interesting interation between the two of them.
I'm looking forward to where you're going with the plot. It looks like it'll get quite complicated as time goes on, but that just means more drama, more confrontations and hopefully some europhoric climaxes (in both senses of the word, of course).
On the subject of climaxes, it should be interesting to see how the current situation changes from what it is now into the more hardcore scenarios you've hinted at.
I noticed a number of people thanking you for your quick updates, I blame them for the lack of recent updates. It's been jinxed.
Unjinx it. Please? I want to know what happens next!! And how Naruto will react to being in a dress.
Hope all is well in your life,
R
I genuinely adore this story. It has just the right amount of drama, suspesne, hillarity, character development, plot and smut to keep me thoroughly entertained and hooked.
Your writing style is lovely and flowing. I've been with left with lots of gorgeous mental images. :D Itachi is possibly my favourite character here. It's wonderful to see him take control, but the less dominant parts of his character are also enjoyable. I also appreciate the feistiness of Naruto, it makes for interesting interation between the two of them.
I'm looking forward to where you're going with the plot. It looks like it'll get quite complicated as time goes on, but that just means more drama, more confrontations and hopefully some europhoric climaxes (in both senses of the word, of course).
On the subject of climaxes, it should be interesting to see how the current situation changes from what it is now into the more hardcore scenarios you've hinted at.
I noticed a number of people thanking you for your quick updates, I blame them for the lack of recent updates. It's been jinxed.
Unjinx it. Please? I want to know what happens next!! And how Naruto will react to being in a dress.
Hope all is well in your life,
R
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September 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
omg i have to register because i wanna give you this review !
i'm so in love with this cute and beautiful story !! ; ;
my heart clenching at some scene and also almost explode with our cutie pie kitsune's cuteness >w<
but you won't update this anymore ? ; ;
i'm so in love with this cute and beautiful story !! ; ;
my heart clenching at some scene and also almost explode with our cutie pie kitsune's cuteness >w<
but you won't update this anymore ? ; ;
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April 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
What an amazing read!!! I can't wait to know more about Naruto's history and I hope Itachi will open up to Naruto more. LOVE LOVE LOVE this so very much. Can't wait to see what happens next! :D
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February 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Pretty interesting.
Will Naruto "save" Pain as well?
I wonder, isn't there people (Tsunade, Kakashi) to worry about Naruto?
Though, from Naruto I expected something along the lines that he thought Itachi was displeased with his trying to avoid contact, and going to Dei because of that, which it turn make him question his pet position.
On that note. What is the Pet and Master definition in your fic/world. If not the pleasure factor, then why someone would get a Human Pet? A dog will give you unconditional love, protection ect, but a human? Isn't it the same if one would hire a daily companion (though, that person is taking care of his principal, not the way around).
Also, as for now Naruto is staying all the time doing pretty nothing. Wouldn't he get to do something with his time? Learning english (though, I think anime is that for [I learned that way German:}]), or maybe he has a hidden art/design/other talent?
Will Naruto "save" Pain as well?
I wonder, isn't there people (Tsunade, Kakashi) to worry about Naruto?
Though, from Naruto I expected something along the lines that he thought Itachi was displeased with his trying to avoid contact, and going to Dei because of that, which it turn make him question his pet position.
On that note. What is the Pet and Master definition in your fic/world. If not the pleasure factor, then why someone would get a Human Pet? A dog will give you unconditional love, protection ect, but a human? Isn't it the same if one would hire a daily companion (though, that person is taking care of his principal, not the way around).
Also, as for now Naruto is staying all the time doing pretty nothing. Wouldn't he get to do something with his time? Learning english (though, I think anime is that for [I learned that way German:}]), or maybe he has a hidden art/design/other talent?
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July 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh... the plot thickens!
Loved this chapter. Pein is such a bad ass, bt I wonder if he is too controlled by Madara, or will you keep him out of it. Does Naruto know of Kyuubi? Does Kyuubi know of Naruto? Why are Sakura and Sasuke dating?! GAH. The only thing I dislike about the fan fic.
Good job though. What time is this taking place in? If October is only a few months away then that means Itachi can still control Naruto once he finds out about the family business. I doubt Konoha would fall.
Loved this chapter. Pein is such a bad ass, bt I wonder if he is too controlled by Madara, or will you keep him out of it. Does Naruto know of Kyuubi? Does Kyuubi know of Naruto? Why are Sakura and Sasuke dating?! GAH. The only thing I dislike about the fan fic.
Good job though. What time is this taking place in? If October is only a few months away then that means Itachi can still control Naruto once he finds out about the family business. I doubt Konoha would fall.
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July 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*DIES*AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWw
Yaya for Sasuke to the rescue! And yay for Itachi getting his head out of his ass. XD Very sweet chapter. Very very awesome. Made me smile! Heehee
Yaya for Sasuke to the rescue! And yay for Itachi getting his head out of his ass. XD Very sweet chapter. Very very awesome. Made me smile! Heehee
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July 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
very cool story~!
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July 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
pein you're a REAL bastard. Might i hope something suitibly dire happens to him in the future?