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January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying the development of this story so far, and I like how you have kept Itachi and Naruto in character. Their situation is quite interesting. If I may offer a bit of constructive criticism, there is some repetitive language that could be looked at. It was a little distracting to me, and took away from the flow of the story. Other than that, I loved it. :3 Great job! I'm looking forward to more. :)
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January 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ha! They're kind of hilarious together... my question though... Sasuke is the same age as Itachi's pet right? so how's that gonna play out?
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January 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Really nice I like this fic!!! See you again soon!!!
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January 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh man i liked your story and r u going to add more to it hope so cause wanna know wat is going to happen next smiles
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December 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So far, it's a very sexy story. I loved Kisame, and I like the chemistry between Naruto and Itachi. I look forward to more.
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December 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Gawk!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait to read more of this! ItaxNaru is sorely lacking in the fandom imo & I'm really excited by your work!!! :D Love how the story is going & can't wait to read more!
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December 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
a new chapter! yay! Wished it was longer tho :( OH well, can't wait for the next one!
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December 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
In i passed this up. I'm nto huge over Itachi/Naru but the summery had me wondering so i clicked in. The writing is very good and the story line has me happy to see a new chapter. I wish they were longer, I hate to see one end. :0) but that's a good thing right?
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December 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Keep going please! i really like this!!
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December 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
I love your story.
I really like the plot development (I hate it if authors just rush the story line) and the insight in the characters, I personally think Itachi is very hard to do without him becoming rather OoC so I'm pretty impressed with the way you portrait him...
I hope you continue writing soon because you really could me curious on Naruto's past and Pein's motives (like with the first chapter - was he giving orders to find just a guy like Naruto because Itachi fancies his type or was he looking for Naruto speficially and if so then why?)
looking forward to the next chap
Hespera
I love your story.
I really like the plot development (I hate it if authors just rush the story line) and the insight in the characters, I personally think Itachi is very hard to do without him becoming rather OoC so I'm pretty impressed with the way you portrait him...
I hope you continue writing soon because you really could me curious on Naruto's past and Pein's motives (like with the first chapter - was he giving orders to find just a guy like Naruto because Itachi fancies his type or was he looking for Naruto speficially and if so then why?)
looking forward to the next chap
Hespera