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Oh, evil, so very evil!

I like how you fit the good smutty intent into the mid three sentences, and I can empathise with his irritation because I've had second hand books before where the previous owner has removed the last pages - not quite the same thing, but close enough - and it sounds like a good way to make it clear to his lover that he didn't want to experiance that :)

Nooooooooo! That's so horrible! The ultimate torture for a reader! You managed to capture the seething anger one would feel in his position extremely well, especially for a drabble! Keep up the good job, it was very well done.

That sounds like a terrific plan. Even though the exact details about the writings aren't there it's still easy to figure out what it involves. It's also fun to think about whatever Kakashi left to get Yamato so worked up and even angry enough to hatch this revenge plot.

Oh, I liked this! Short, sweet and wicked! Very nice indeed, and I hope you do more prompts. :D