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for Superstition

by emmel

person dlist
schedule May 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ummmmm yeah...and it should have stayed locked up. What is this? Half the time I didn't know who was even talking
person aya
schedule February 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this was freaking genius!!!
a much needed break from all the sasusaku angst i have been reading.
and sai's lines are hilarious! "dingdong itachi's dead" killed me.
great job :)
person Ajablue
schedule January 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
"wanton shaft of darkness"
This made me laugh out loud.

Honestly I am not much of a SasuSaku fan, but I did like your story. I felt for Sakura, especially when she was sure he was only taunting her further. Overall a very nice story and I greatly enjoyed the ending.