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for Let's Disappear

by ChiyokoChan

schedule May 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just loved every bit of the part about the huge spider in the bathroom....it was very funny and I could picture each and every move he made!! AWSOME!!

Darn....only one chapter...went to look for another chap to find out about the mystery building only to find its not up yet...oh the waiting is going to kill me.....

I want to know.....whats in the building!!!!!

Question....whats up with the words in everyones story thats blue and you click on it and it takes you off to some really stupid web site??? Anyone have any idea why its like that?? How did they get like that in the story?? I've seen it pop up on my works and other peoples....how do you get rid of it??
schedule January 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm curious to know what Sasuke's role is in all of this. Good start!
person smint45
schedule January 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really like the start of this!!! Was it Sasuke who placed him on the bed after he fell?? I so can't wait for him to appear!!!! I was so happy you put this wonderful stroy up today because it's my birthday!!!! Thank you and please update soon!!!!
person ZeroZoey
schedule January 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Realllllly enjoyed the first chapter cannot wait to read more. I think you have a good story here hope you update soon