rate_review Reviews

I will buy Suckura, I mean Suckura. As for my review of this brief story. Your writing was well done for 2 forced non-consensual sex scenes. I'm unfamiliar with excellent anal writing, but a great example (in my opinion) of debased oral action comes from Corrupted, a Mass Effect fanfiction by CobaltAC. His descriptive choice of words really heightens the debasement of skull-fucking, which is what Suckura job appears to be. I applaud going in media-res into the story, I would only recommend consulting CobaltAC's works for inspiration in the oral category. Hope this is appreciated.
Is there anything more to go into announcing an interest in purchasing one of the girls?

I'm sorry to hear that Ino has already been sold, but I'll hapily 'buy' Sakura or if you plan on expanding, I'd be happy to attend future auctions of the Konoha girls. ;)

"200,000 ryo for Suckura"!, I say aloud as I raise my number to place my bid.

I want ino

20000 for hinata

if she's still available I'll take Sakura great story by the way

..... the idea is alright, i guess, if all i was looking for was random porn (which i was.) so i'll give ya a 4 out of 5 for now.
I'll also place a bid of +9000 Ryo for Hanabi and Tayuya, i know Tayuya isn't a Konoha girl, but meh. i like the foul-mouthed red-head. :P

I love it, please tell me that other Naruto girls are going to be put through that, I would love to see Hinata, Tenten, Tsunade and Anko put through it also and have Naruto buy them along with Sakura and Ino.

I don't care about Ino or Sakura, but I enjoy Temari and have some suggestions for here if she is being sold as well as some training

I like the general idea, but I wish Naruto was the one screwing them like that. You never see enough of Naruto dominating girls. Have him dominate.