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for The Mating Dance

by AngelTalion

person Ajablue
schedule January 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am throwing in a vote for Itachi. I just adore Itachi and Naruto together and I am not a huge Sasuke fan in general.

Anyway, I wasn't sure I would like this story, even through the first few chapters, but I am glad I continued to give it a shot. I am enjoying it very much.
person Woolfey
schedule January 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I vote for Both Itachi & Sasuke =) I love this fic and others of yours. Can't wait for the next chapter!!
person Dorkchic
schedule January 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am actually a HUGE Ita/Naru fan, but I cannot decide whom I would prefer to see with Naruto. I don't suppose you could be talked into making it a SIN grouping? Itachi could help Sasuke kill Orochimaru and Kabuto (because he can't stand them for what he has put Sasuke through) and then they could both come back to Konoha and put a foot in the council's collective ass and maybe a kunai or two for good measure. I think the Sasu/Ita/Naru grouping is smoking hot! And as for Itachi and Sasuke... I think Itachi did most of what he did to Sasuke out of a sense of guilt to force Sasuke to kill him. And as for Sasuke- I don't think you can hate someone with that kind of passion without truly loving them as well. Fingers crossed and hope you update soon!!!
schedule January 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
SASUKE SASUKE SASUKE SASUKE SASUKE SASUKE!!!!!!! PLEASE LET IT BE SASUKE!!!!!! SASUKE!!!!!!!!
schedule January 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am so stuck on this story! It's been a long time since I felt like a fan girl while ready a fan fic. Still, I love this!
My vote is on Itanaru x3, you can never find it anymore and the way you write your lemons? Mwahaha, truly the fan girl in my squees XDD

Please keep it up!
person Repanse
schedule January 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
We want SasuNaru, of course!
person Repanse
schedule January 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Purposefully or not, Itachi's actions hurt Sasuke a lot. Naruto knows that and is too loyal to Sasuke (and loves him) to "betray" him and choose Itachi over him. Moreover, if we consider canon!Itachi, he would be aware of how much he has already taken away from Sasuke and so he wouldn't want to steal away the last thing Sasuke can ever care about.
As for the threesome...excuse me but it's just a lame solution to have Naruto fuck the both of them just because it's mating time. Naruto doesn't harbour any feelings for Itachi (and I don't see how he would suddenly begin to) and it would make him appear more like a toy/mate to fuck and fight over than a person with feelings and power to CHOOSE, who loves and deserved to be loves. Also, the basis of the relationship between the Uchiha brothers is rivalry (especially on Sasuke's part)....it's written in their blood: do you think Sasuke would share a lover with Itachi?
So, SasuNaru indeed.
schedule January 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ohhh...interesting development! hmmm...how about both? O.O woah! i think that's hot! XD whoever he ends up with i'm sure it will be HOT!!! XD please update soon! ja ne! ;}
person arialee
schedule January 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ita/naru/sasu

and awesome story!
schedule January 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
please dont let Itachi get to naruto!!! He wont treat him right. He will jus kidnap him and abuse him. Not right at LL. Please make it so that sauke gets there first. although a little itachi/sauke showdown over naruto would be awesome to read!!