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LOL! I would've loved to see Kakashi lose his cool with lust for seeing Naruto. I didn't I'd like this, but I do.

Damn Tali, that was such an erotic, smut-filled chapter. I loved it!!! I got all hot and bothered. Great fun with sexy, dominant Kakashi; he did Naruto just right. I can't wait to see how Shika handles the in heat kit.^^

woah! the edited chapter was HOT! thanks for doing it! XD and the fourth one kinda made me fell like it was a filler...btw what was shino's role there?? does he have an "interest" in naruto or just the brotherly kind? well over all it was great! i can't wait to read the next one so please update soon! ja ne! ;}

OMG!! You did it again.X3 I was incredibly turned on with how Kakashi scolded and punished his pet. I was so turned on and got rEAlly excited. You've made Kakashi do that for me. I love Kiba but he better watch out. He's the lesson of a lifetime.XD

Awww, poor Naruto. Do u think he was instinctually dreaming of Sasuke as the mate with dark hair since he was at the Uchiha district? I'm so glad he's got all his friends and no one dislikes the way he is but still protects and loves him. Thank you so much for early smut, it's greatly appreciated. I really love the story as well. I am really interested in how Naruto and Sasuke will get together as well as how the 'Alphas' approve of letting Naruto go.

Awwwwww. I hope that Naruto can help Sai not be so sad. It is also curious that Naruto cannot remember where he was. He could remember that he was being followed by two ninja, but not that he went to the Uchiha district or that he had to leave the district before Neji found him. I could understand not knowing where he was in the district. Or maybe Naruto just didn't want to say where he had been. Pet peeve... the plural of ninja is ninja, no 's' on the end! I don't think you did it. I was just ranting.

I think if just Sasuke's scent was enough to help Naruto endure his heat then when they actually run into each other it should be pretty halarious. Naruto drifting toward Sasuke in a daze sniffing the air like a perverse version of Toucan Sam and Sasuke giving the Uchiha version of standing there with his mouth hanging open with his eyes wide and staring. Also looking foward to everyone else's reaction to that scene since they usually just stand there being nervous while Naruto and Sasuke have their angst moment. Sakura is probably not going to deal well and Sai is probably going to have something inappropriate, confused, funny, and right to say about it.

I think it is sweet how protective everyone is being and wonder how long it takes before Naruto cannot take it anymore and tries to sneak out. Anyway... loved the last chapter and am super looking foward to the next update. Keep up the fabulous job!!!

Poor Naruto. I wanna see what happends next.

Seeeeeeeeexxxxyyyyyyyyy!!!! I love that the heat was rolling off of Gaara and Neji in waves and that Neji was so sweet and compassionate toward Naruto when he thought he had upset them.

this was so good. I cant wait for the next chapter

oh my gosh this is just tooooo adorable! I LOVE this fluff! It's just...just...so...adorable! And Sakura smells bad lol. Hilarious lol.I hope you have lots of little fluffy plot bunnies hopping around because this is just too cute for words & I can't wait to see who else Naruto thinks smells good!