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for Keeper

by djserani

person DetoxAngel(toolazytosignin)
schedule February 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWWW MAAAAAANNNNN!!!!!!! There's no more?! Please, hurry and update before we die of anticipation!
person qwerty
schedule February 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story! The Slow Seduction of Iruka!
Keep going!!
schedule January 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
loved it.
person satterb
schedule January 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You're such a talented writer. You're conversations are smooth and seem to be put together effortlessly. Thanks for updating this story, I love it!
schedule January 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Stupendous! This has got to be one of the best threesomes Ive ever read ^.^ what a shame it is just a one shot :(
schedule January 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
No! This cant be a oneshot!?!? Give me kakashi's or Yamato's pov or something!!! This pairing blindsided me but it worked SO well!!! Im begging you!!!!
schedule January 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yummy!
schedule January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Iruka would die from the pleasure.

Izumo would die from jealousy.
person drivven
schedule January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very sweet ending. I loved it. Have to say that this was not a group I would have put together in my brain quite like that, but I am very glad I gave it a chance. Thank you for a nice read. Well done!