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mmmmmmmmmmmmmm still not so sure about Oro's intentions, we could say that he is willing to go very far to win this battle, but lets not forget that he is a snake, Eve was tempted by one and Saya is having the same problem, he is a manipulative bastard and a liar, a very sexy liar but still a liar and in a liar lips any truth will be doubtful!! At least, if she survives, we can be sure that a moment of passion with him will be unforgettable mmmmmmmmmm how much I envy her, lets see, he is sexy, powerful, great body, flexible, long tongue, probably very passionate and with tons of stamina..... *¬* *nosebleed* not so sure she is going to be able to walk after that hahahahahaha thank you so much for sharing, can't wait for next chapter, take care, XoXo.

this part made me lol,
She laughed softly and asked, “So what’s the next try of my patience? Hold me down and try to take me against my will?” Orochimaru was as still and calm as could be when he answered with a question of his own. “Would you like that?”.

haha oh......orochimaru, you manipulative bastard. Seems like saya is having some pretty complicated feeling. She knows he is not someone you shouldn't get involved with, especially sexually, but she just cant resist. who can blame her? i wonder how their relationship will end once Oro loses interest. will he lose interest?

Holy crap!!! oops!! sorry but Oro SAVED her, HE SAVED HER!!! O.O' WTF? never saw that coming, that means a lot coming from him mmmmmmmmmm this is getting better and better, poor Kabuto that must have been hard for him, now he knows she is important to him, hope to read more soon, take care ok, thanks for sharing, XoXo.

exciting chapter! sayas reaction was pretty amusing even though i felt bad for the pain she was experience. huh?! orochimaru saved her at the risk of his life. It's quite shocking. When he was yelling at kabuto to stop I was assuming that Orochimaru was just being possessive. He's sadistic, but he likes to be the one in charge and manipulating his victims. Saving her life though shows that he might have deeper feeling for Saya. I wonder if Kabuto will be punished for his insubordination?

Wow!! A story where Orochimaru finds love, nice! ^^

Love it, poor Saya between loving and hating the feelings he is giving her, sexy bastard! hahahaha, very interesting but pity it was so short *pout* hahahahaha anyway I will try to have patience xP thanks for the update hope to read you soon

hm....just like a predator to love the chase of a prey. Saya continues fighting and it entertains orochimaru more, but I'm wondering if their may be something deeper. After all, he took the time to watch her wriggle in pain, give a bite mark, and then stay be her side. Guess i'll just have to see where this relationship will go. I have to agree with Orochimaru about being interested in what Saya's reaction will be to the situation he has imposed on her.

thanks for the quick chapter updates :3

hm....yeah, i guess her not showing up could be interpreted as weakness....or stubbornness ^__^

Orochimaru, that bastard, did he give Saya the curse mark?! i know she'll survive (1 of the main characters and all) but its probably gonna be painful. I'm interested in seeing her reaction to his dominating desires and also in what the consequences of her getting bitten may be. Lose control of her body? make her desire him more? O_o
looking forward to the next update, like always!

Interesting, I was thinking that he would play with her some more, but she must be getting important to him if he bit her mmmmmmmmmmm seem like long term plans, maybe at the beginning he just wanted her for taking care of "his needs" but the attraction they are feeling is too strong =) nice, love this chapter, it was hot *¬* Oro is soooo sexy, hope to read you soon, take care, XoXo.

hehe saya is fighting back, i like it! Her relationship with Orochimaru seems to be becoming more hazardous with him being a sadistic guy and kabuto's overwhelming jealousy. I wonder what Orochimaru has in store for Saya when she comes to finish their 'time'? I could imagine her being stubborn and not showing up to his room just to show that she is not so easily manipulated.
Thanks for the continuous updates!