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January 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awsome amazing inspiring all great words I could use to describe this story. My only complaint is the length of chapters much to short :)
Love your take on naruto seme and sasuke uke. Makes good sense and you keep People in charector quite well. Soo pls keep on writing this pls! I want more!
Love your take on naruto seme and sasuke uke. Makes good sense and you keep People in charector quite well. Soo pls keep on writing this pls! I want more!
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January 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh you have me hooked.... i know what happens with the courting of naruto and sasuke.... please hurry and update soon
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January 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awsome! So awsome =)
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January 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I actually thought that Sasuke was going to make things very difficult for Naruto when in fact he was worried! Nothing says the bastard cares more than that I believe. Was so pleased to see an update today!!
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January 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! How I love this one! Awsome!!!!!
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January 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Do you know how god awful long i've been waiting for a narusasu vampire story? and then one lands blissfully in my lap!!! PRaise the gods!!
I saved this as a book on my ipod and got HOOKED! i loved the whole courtship thing and they revealing themselves slowly. Sasuke needs to allow himself to open up more! I just hope he's willing to try a second time.
I cried when Naruto was really sick..and so surprised that fugaku and minato were there too!
Just know that we really appreciate the quick updates hun! Love to the story!
I saved this as a book on my ipod and got HOOKED! i loved the whole courtship thing and they revealing themselves slowly. Sasuke needs to allow himself to open up more! I just hope he's willing to try a second time.
I cried when Naruto was really sick..and so surprised that fugaku and minato were there too!
Just know that we really appreciate the quick updates hun! Love to the story!
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January 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! Poor Naruto more poetry writting. LOL I love it... I sort of hate Minato but that's ok cause I love that Sasuke came to investigate how Naruto was... even if it was in the guise of kicking him out.
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January 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
love it!! very good with their personalities!
keep the story going! <3
keep the story going! <3
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January 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I finally let my sis on the computer long enough to read this...she loves it tooooooo!
Poor Naruto is so going to be put through the mill with Sasuke lol. I wonder why Naruto reacted differently to being blood deprived?
Poor Naruto is so going to be put through the mill with Sasuke lol. I wonder why Naruto reacted differently to being blood deprived?
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January 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh...this was great! I haven't seen a naru vamp fic like this one which is always a plus. I really look forward to seeing where you take this.
Advice wise, there are a few spots where there seems to be words missing, but I know your beta will catch that. The only other thing I can advise you to do is work on your page breaks. when you have long lines of repeating characters, like this ----------
If its too long, it stretches the page and makes a lot of readers have to scroll left to right to read your chapters. Shortening those will help that lil issue.
Again great job!
Ezzie
Advice wise, there are a few spots where there seems to be words missing, but I know your beta will catch that. The only other thing I can advise you to do is work on your page breaks. when you have long lines of repeating characters, like this ----------
If its too long, it stretches the page and makes a lot of readers have to scroll left to right to read your chapters. Shortening those will help that lil issue.
Again great job!
Ezzie