AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Bastards and Fangs

by Xiophelia

schedule January 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I so love it! Please hurry with the next one =)
person meowkuu2
schedule January 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!
*rolls around*

NOOOOOO you can't stop there!! I need more!!
schedule January 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* I love how Naruto will do anything to protect Sasuke. And a jealous Sasuke... :)
schedule January 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG I just opened this story to check the disclaimer, but with the title of your first chapter, I HAVE TO READ THIS WHEN I FINISH THE NARUTO SECTION! *HATES sparkling vampires*
schedule January 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Just started on this fic & it is wonderful and refreshing!
Please keep up the good work!

Also I hope Minato has a Really Good reason for not seeing Naruto or Kushina!
schedule January 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have skimmed by this story several times because I usually don't care for how dark author's try to write their vampire stories but I tried this because I love the other stories I've read from you... and I am so NOT disappointed! MAN it would have been awful to miss out on this. You're writing style is really dead on. Your plot is well thought out, great forshadowing, serious parts & humor really well mixed. It's just a pleasure to read this.
schedule January 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Also saw you needed a beta. Not sure how that works (I've offered a few times to people but don't know how that works really-never hear from anyone so I must be doing it wrong lol). But I beta pretty much everything I read for myself because grammar & spacing sometimes drives me nuts. So if you ever want a copy of the changed grammar and wording stuff just let me know. Uh, somehow... huh do we just post our emails? Ok, I sound stupid, bye till the next chapter!
schedule January 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ok thirdtimes a charm right? I've tried to review this new chapter 2 times before! BLAH

ok so I LOVE IT! I love that there are all these set rules and things Naruto HAS to do as part of the courtship ritual. Its like there is a book somewhere that Sasuke is hiding from Naruto just to suprise him each time. Bwahahahaha... I also love that Sai flirting with Naruto irritated Sasuke. YAY!
schedule January 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy I got everyone out the house and started cooking my chili before I sat down to read this.
Wow. I had a serious spaz attack. Lol. Can't wait to see more!
schedule January 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Trust Itachi to make trouble! Great chapter... next please