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Dear god, this story had be sobbing the first time I read it and nearly did again this time. It's so...I don't even have words for it. It hurts so much but at the same time feels so right. (And then I just laughed out loud because I didn't mean to be referencing the D/s nature of your works.) Ugg, I love your writing so much. I often have to take breaks because it can tug at my heart so much. I don't even know what does it. Maybe it's the subtlety of your writing that makes the emotions that much more powerful. They creep up in intensity without you noticing and then suddenly you're just like, oh shit, I'm feeling way too much about fictional characters right now. Hahah, but it's soooo good. I love it, thank you. And this piece just makes me wish you had given them a full story. God, I know you wrote a lot for them, with the three Breaking pieces, but I just want to know everything. I want to know Sasuke's past and what is it, exactly, that has him so fucked up. And then I love love love how he is with everyone else, Shika in particular. I also read Undercurrents on here, and, really, I should have reviewed that, because oh my god, soooo much love. And yes, I think I will go write a review for it. Ugg, I really cannot say enough. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. :)

Awww... so cute... They so adore each other... Hm... I always think how would others react to see this side of Sasuke...

Simply beautiful.

Really needed to read something like this, puts you in a good space...makes you feel all warm and fuzzy.
Beautifully written, it produced lovely emotions and suspense I found...maybe it was just me. I really got the image of Naruto dancing (because that guy doesn't just WALK) on egg shells around Sasuke, and it was a brilliant contrast to the stoic anger Sasuke emitted earlier in the piece! I really appreciated this lovely piece of writing, made my day actually!

I really appreciated this piece from you, thank you! It was a good read. It portrayed aspects of the relationship that few authors notice.

That was very sweet. I love what you have done with the Naruto characters, the personalities you have created are staggering. I really love reading about these relationships. Great work.

Beautiful

Nice story, totaly love it.

I woke up, made blueberry muffins, logged into aff, figured what the hell, and looked to see if anything new was up. I'm so glad I looked. I love this new side of Naruto and Sasuke. I love the way you write angst and romance and make it so real and true and honest. I love that Naruto wasn't by any means and expert or always right in how to care for Sasuke, but he keeps trying. I even love how by the end of this fic I was teary, and desperate for more of your work.

Never stop writing and I'm sorry my reviews are always such drivel.

That was beautifully written. I felt every emotion u you put forth of Naruto's and Sasuke's. You made feel just as at home as they felt. I loved the way u described everything. I seriously need to read ur other stories. I've also seen ur other fandoms and will check them out as well.^^