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June 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i like it. it' cute so far.
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January 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was so cute!
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January 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aww, this is looking cute already :3
I love GarraxNaruto, keep it up!
I love GarraxNaruto, keep it up!
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January 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Your first chapter is confusing. Naruto introduced himself as if he and Gaara had not been previously acquainted. I know that Gaara did not reciprocate, and yet, Naruto referred to him as 'Sabakuno' afterward. How did Naruto know his name if they didn't know each other?
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January 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
awww that was sweet!! I liked it a lot!
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January 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So, I have to agree with Prism0467 that the story is a little confusing. Gaara never introduced himself to Naruto and yet the blonde knows his first and last name. Althought, based off the end of chapter 2, I'm guessing that someone had already told Naruto who Gaara was and what he looked like. But other than that, I like it. The summary is more than enough to draw anyone in so they can see what the hell you're talking about. And I love that song!!!
Rubber ducky you're the one, you make bathtime lots of fun! Rubber ducky you're my very best friend its true!!
My sister and I used to listen to a tape of that song at my grandma's house all the time!!!
Rubber ducky you're the one, you make bathtime lots of fun! Rubber ducky you're my very best friend its true!!
My sister and I used to listen to a tape of that song at my grandma's house all the time!!!