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for Jealousy

by AngelTalion

schedule June 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Short but sweet, I like it. Poor Itachi-kun... maybe if he tried to intercede before they started noticing each other he might of stood a chance =/

But he was too busy drowning himself in the river of denile.
schedule June 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Sucks to be 'tachi huh.
schedule June 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Damn!! That was really Hot!! You are such a TEASE to Itachi....poor guy....I feel so bad for him and his blue.......(ya lol you get the picture...lol WICKED!!)
schedule January 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Whew...that was really hot :)
schedule January 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness! I absolutely love this!! I am such a fan of Ita/Naru and I love Itachi narrating. More soon, please? X3
schedule January 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Poor dazed thing!!! I loved the way you described itachi's feelings and his sad jealousy... The flow of words and time was superb! It almost felt poetic... Wonder if you could write ita/sasu/naru??*hint,hint* i would love to read your take on that!!!
person satterb
schedule January 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yummy! This was short and sweet, but very well written. Thanks for sharing.
person roro237
schedule January 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy! I liked the narration from Itachi thoughts! And let me tell you I found it very hot:) That was an incredible sexy part out side the door wOw! ^_^