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typical, self centred Uchiah

I think Sai would be perfect for him. Sasuke is destroying Naruto with this, and I don't think Naruto would be able to put up with this for long.

Pls continue & make sasu suffer ... A lot!

Ahhh it's an evil fic!! I want sasuke with naruto but he's such an ass that I don't think he deserves him!!! Soo I would like to see sasuke sufffer!!! I can't wait to read the next chappie thanks!!!

I am loathed to say it but, i love a possossive Sasuke. Even though I feel bad for Naruto, Sasuke is a turn on for me when he's like that.^^

This chapter reads like character bashing of Sasuke. He is excessively awful without a single redeeming positive quality, and without rhyme or reason for how he could have evolved into this sort of bastard. If you wanted to put Naruto into an abusive relationship, I would have rather that it had been with a minor character--someone we don't know as well as Sasuke--because in a canon setting, there needs to be a whole LOT of explanation for why canon Sasuke (whose normal character type is apathetic and asexual) has ended up this way.

Sasuke's flaws reflect poorly on Naruto and make him look incredibly pathetic for putting up with this. The expected, cliche outcome of all of this, particularly since you have already indicated that Naruto is a bit of a slut and has slept his way through a good number of his friends, is for Naruto to sex his way into happiness, either by transforming Sasuke, or more likely, by embarking on an affair (or a series of affairs) until a more worthy seme arrives. At which point, as readers we will all be expected to point and laugh at mean old Sasuke when he gets what he deserves and is left behind. (More character bashing.)

I honestly don't know if I will continue with this fic or not. Perhaps if Sasuke becomes a more rounded character, or if you avoid plot cliches. Otherwise, I was very disappointed with the characters in this.

It's interesting and I like it. Many stories that had covered Naruto/Sasuke relationship, with an extreme dominant and abusive Sasuke, showed a victimized Naruto. I like many of these stories, but I think that your story will be that and more. I like sunny Naruto I and truly believe that this kind of ever optimistic people really exists. But when they fall into despair, into darkness of depression, well, they fall hard. I'm very curious about the future. Of course, of this story.

Poor Naruto...he just cant win. I like it so far and Im interested to see where you are going with this.

AAAHH Sasuke!! That bastard is hurting Naru-Chan again!! :'(

I love the chapter and can't wait for the next one! :3

I hate Sasuke in this! Poor Naruto!! You're good you. You always bring out strong emotions in me with your stories:) I love that about you:) Thanks for sharing:) Now tomorrow at work I'll have this story suck in my head. I'll be wishing I could shake some sense into Naruto head ^_^