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March 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aww, seems like we won't see chibi-Naruto anymore... But very sweet ending. I didn't expect the Naruto/Hinata part, though. And of course Sasuke would go angsting alone about it. I wonder how long it could have gone on if Kakashi hadn't intervened.
It's a bit ironic too that the situation with Itachi was reversed: adult-Naruto took Sasuke's side against him. Poor Itachi must have missed his chibi... And I'm glad the whole mess with Naruto being healed at least helped Sasuke and Itachi get closer.
I was a bit confused at the end, though: did Naruto already have feelings for Sasuke before he became a chibi and it translated in his chibi form - or did he start loving Sasuke after he remembered everything from when he was a chibi? Because it seemed that during the whole chapter he didn't see Sasuke as anything but his best friend, and he suddenly changed his mind at the very end...
Oh and the chapter before the last was also very moving and sweet, with Sasuke finally opening up to Naruto about his feelings for him, and them getting betrothed.
Anyway, I'm glad about the happy ending but I'm also a bit sad that the story is over. Also, I think it could be very interesting to have a sequel with Itachi's perspective: how he met Naruto, started his relationship with Kakashi, and how he felt when he was reunited with his brother and afterwards when he 'lost' Naruto to him... What do you think? :)
It's a bit ironic too that the situation with Itachi was reversed: adult-Naruto took Sasuke's side against him. Poor Itachi must have missed his chibi... And I'm glad the whole mess with Naruto being healed at least helped Sasuke and Itachi get closer.
I was a bit confused at the end, though: did Naruto already have feelings for Sasuke before he became a chibi and it translated in his chibi form - or did he start loving Sasuke after he remembered everything from when he was a chibi? Because it seemed that during the whole chapter he didn't see Sasuke as anything but his best friend, and he suddenly changed his mind at the very end...
Oh and the chapter before the last was also very moving and sweet, with Sasuke finally opening up to Naruto about his feelings for him, and them getting betrothed.
Anyway, I'm glad about the happy ending but I'm also a bit sad that the story is over. Also, I think it could be very interesting to have a sequel with Itachi's perspective: how he met Naruto, started his relationship with Kakashi, and how he felt when he was reunited with his brother and afterwards when he 'lost' Naruto to him... What do you think? :)
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March 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Super cute way to end this! I loved how protective of Sasuke Naruto became when he saw Itachi. Since Sasuke had spent so much time taking care of him, it was like a little role reversal there. :)
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March 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
NOOOO!!! is this really the end?
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March 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
what holes? rare pinpricks maybe but not holes lol
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March 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i found the ending a little abrupt, but it was a cute story overall
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March 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwww. Now I'm sad!!! I don't want it to be over. I wanted to see more Chibi Naruto!!!!
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March 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was so fucking cute it was painful. I absolutely loved it! chibi!Naruto was too adorable and Sasuke was all fluffy. This was fantastic.
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March 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Cute ending, I loved it! Great job as always from you :)
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March 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The ending was too fast. You started good, built it up, had an conflict near the end, then bang-done. It left me scratching my head asking, "is that it? That fast and it's done?"
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March 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
thanks for updating!
the story was absolutely wonderful! i love it! i do hope there will be a sequel :)
thank you for writing a really good story. I enjoy reading every chapter... Naruto is really adorable when he is in his chibi form
the story was absolutely wonderful! i love it! i do hope there will be a sequel :)
thank you for writing a really good story. I enjoy reading every chapter... Naruto is really adorable when he is in his chibi form