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by AngelTalion

person blu kat
schedule March 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just knew your story was going to be good but this was fantastic. The best parts about your story was that you didn't automatically have everyone being nice or very trusting of Itachi and Sasuke when they came back to the village. I also loved the way you went about Naruto being a chibi, Sasuke and Itachi not getting along and Kakashi and Itachi dating. It was so different from other stories I've read with Naruto turn into a child and I thank you for that and it was complete. Thank you for this entertainment and great read.
person airhead622
schedule March 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ok seriously??? wtf!!!
you can't give up on ur story like this and leave your fans just hanging.
that was totally NOT and ending. What about the wedding can we get an epilogue???
I mean, not even a lemon or a lime but, at least a real true ending???
(ps i'm only ranting b/c i truly do love ur style and this story....
i was dead serious about the ending though!!! much love and happy writing...plzzzzzzzzz!!!)
person Ana
schedule March 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love your story!!!!:)
schedule March 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
EXCELLENT plot here! I loved reading it so far, it's truly a great one from you! Kiba...well...Kiba is probably going to die lol. Nothing is going to stop Sasuke from waging war on his clan haha. Keep up the great work here :)
schedule March 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just had to reread chapter 5 because it was super funny before I read the new chapter. Aw Gaara-chan is awesomely overprotective. Kawaii!!! And Sasu-chan... Good job! Lol. The way to a Naruto's heart be him chibified or adult is always through his stomach. Can wait for more!
person Althydia
schedule March 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aww, Sasuke and Naruto seem to have made up! I still hope Sasuke would tell Naruto he loves him, though. Or at least that he can't live without him. Chibi Naruto would certainly appreciate it and Sasuke could take it off his chest before preparing to admit his feelings to mature Naruto.
Tsunade was totally right there too: Sasuke AND Itachi were completely irresponsible and childish with their fight. I think they still need to talk it out more calmly if they want to start over on a healthier basis.
Chibi Naruto is as sweet as ever, and Gaara very protective of him. But I particularly liked how you described Sasuke's reactions to Naruto being scared of him and Kakashi's insight about it.
person Anon
schedule March 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was a good chapter. I cant wait til the next one.
schedule March 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Bad Kashi and Tachi!!! Chibi!Naru didn't know what was happening! And poor Sasu-chan!!! (Wails)
schedule February 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
nnnnn, okay so far this is fun but poor Naru.
and now this latest mess, really, he just can't seem to catch a break
person Anon
schedule February 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I want more. I wanna see what happens