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February 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well, something had to give with all the unresolved tension and feelings between Sasuke and Itachi, but poor Naruto got scared... :( I wonder how Sasuke is going to get out of this one. Protective Gaara must be quite scary and dangerous, right? Plus, many people are going to get angry with him for that one. To be fair, will they be angry at Itachi's behaviour too, who was supposed to be more reasonable than his brother?
Can't wait for the next chapter! Will it be a bit longer? Not enough chibi Naruto with his Sasuke... :)
Can't wait for the next chapter! Will it be a bit longer? Not enough chibi Naruto with his Sasuke... :)
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February 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great plot and story! Much like what I'd expect from you. Just great!
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February 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow this story is absoloutly amazing!!!! I totally love it!!!! Naruto turned chibi thats so cute!!! But I hope they will get their naruto back sometime!!! And Itachi beeing good!!! I love the storys where he comes back and is the good guy!!! Thank you so much for this awesome story so far and i hope to see more soon!!!
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February 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is soooo good!!! I just love hearing how Sasuke feels and gets mad on Naruto's behalf.
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February 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It's a good story, seems like you have a good plot, are thinking about it quite carefully. I only have one little thing and it could be you're bringing it up in later chapters but, Sasuke and Itachi are too relaxed around each other. I know you explained that Itachi wasn't the one who destroyed the clan and explained a bit more how he's actually the good guy, but I work with behaviour analysis on a daily basis and normally if you hate someone for a long time you will still hold onto that hate, blame them for the smallest things that can keep that hate going, pin something on them (such as breaking a plate as daft as it seems), search for any flaw or fault, all to keep in the comfort and safety of old habits. But as I say, I like the story and look forward to reading more!
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February 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awww chibi-Naru is too cute. I'm with Sasu-chan though. Watching Naruto's unfiltered reactions to the world is sobering. I hope this brings insight to Sasuke and gets him to confess. I hope to see more of you soon.
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February 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story. Chibi Naruto is utterly adorable but Sasuke will probably get frustrated if he stays a child too long... well, if Sasuke can finally admit his feelings for him that is. ;)
Plus, Itachi is one of my favourite characters and I love reading him as a loving big brother (which I think is true even in canon). He should really have a serious talk with Sasuke, though. Too much unresolved tension can't be good in the long run...
And it was nice to include Iruka too - he seems to be sometimes forgotten in Naruto fics, even though he's a very important person for Naruto. I do like the fact that Naruto has some unconscious feelings of trust for some people who were close to him before too.
Actually I think you put all my favourite characters in your story! Naruto, Sasuke, Itachi, Kakashi, Iruka, Gaara, Tsunade... - who are all people who have a special relationship with Naruto too. Pretty awesome for me!
Plus, Itachi is one of my favourite characters and I love reading him as a loving big brother (which I think is true even in canon). He should really have a serious talk with Sasuke, though. Too much unresolved tension can't be good in the long run...
And it was nice to include Iruka too - he seems to be sometimes forgotten in Naruto fics, even though he's a very important person for Naruto. I do like the fact that Naruto has some unconscious feelings of trust for some people who were close to him before too.
Actually I think you put all my favourite characters in your story! Naruto, Sasuke, Itachi, Kakashi, Iruka, Gaara, Tsunade... - who are all people who have a special relationship with Naruto too. Pretty awesome for me!
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February 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
that was funny. poor kakashi, his book is gone and he's in trouble. naruto is adorable.
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February 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I cant think of a title, maybe if I read a few more chapters i could. so naruto is afraid of the naras too?
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February 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
EEEEEEEEE!!!!!! I just love Naruto's child speak!!!!