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January 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this story so far. Chibi Naruto is just so very cute and I enjoy the dynamics between the main four so far. Can't wait to read more.
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January 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying it. When I'm laughing while reading, I know its good. I love the interaction with little Naruto and Itachi. Not to mention Kakashi. I feel a bit bad for Sasuke....having Naruto not remember him and all. I'm looking forward to reading more.
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January 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG! i really like the story its sooooo cute, specially a chibi Naruto! :)
I love the interaction between Sasuke and Naruto soooo adorable specially with a toddler Naruto..
I never imagine a Kakashi and Itachi pairing but i like the idea
please update soon!
I love the interaction between Sasuke and Naruto soooo adorable specially with a toddler Naruto..
I never imagine a Kakashi and Itachi pairing but i like the idea
please update soon!
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January 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You have a title! And the summury update is good too.
The chapter was longer and the plot seems to be getting deeper. I can't wait to see more. And smut is always a plus. Lol
The chapter was longer and the plot seems to be getting deeper. I can't wait to see more. And smut is always a plus. Lol
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January 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
it's cute. i hope sasuke becomes super protective of his little chibi friend, and i hope that adorable little naru-chan develops a little crush on sasuke, that would be uber cute.
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January 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
How about this for a title "a fox kit, a wolf and a raven"
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January 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Considering what I read the title is just fine cause I'm pretty lost too (like Sasuke).
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January 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oooooooohhhhhh...this is starting out so good!!!!!!!! I love how Kakashi is acting all sheepish, Itachi is all brotherly bossy, and Naruto is protective of Itachi. Oh just all of it. And yeah, I agree with Sai, it does seem like Kakashi & Itachi know each other really well lol.
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January 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I guess the title would be The Raven, Scarecrow, Snake and The Fox...?
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January 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The start is good, and I like the way you show the interaction between Naruto and Itachi. I don't know how you intend to make your story further, so, about the title is a bit difficult. But I was thinking for a title like "Beyond the clouds", because this is life: beyond the clouds, the sun will shine and the life will go on. Going back to your characters, I think that Kakashi needs a little ‘repositioning”. I don’t see Kakashi so obedient, lazy, yes, but no obedient. Not even in bed. But, well, is your story, not mine. Good luck