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April 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9 was sooooo hot. What am I saying? EVERY CHAPTER is hot. I can't wait for more. SIN is sooooo yummy. <3
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April 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ohoh what a lovely present for naru, itachi is a genius. this story is awesome. i love it
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April 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8 was soooooooo hot. XD Lol @ Naruto: "Oh look, Itachi left me a present." XD that was really funny.
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April 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh! so perfect !!! I wonder what Naruto would do with his new found present XDD
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April 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh!!! How could you?! How could you leave us like that?! Its down right evil! More please!!!
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March 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So, I just discovered SIN (and it took me til now - writing this comment - to realise that sin is an acronym for Sasu Ita and Naru LOL)...
Anyway, now that I had my revelation. I LOVE IT! Wow, it's sooo good. I love the way you write Naru's personality and attitude; it really comes across well. Him being totally into his car completely suits him. Also, I really loved seeing Sasu's more vulnerable side. When he started to cry I was totally like Awwwwwwwwwww, he needs cuddles! Or a good session with his men :P The dynamics between Naruto and Itachi are interesting to see too. Love Naruto's bossiness as a bottom -- its smexyyy.
Favourite lines so far:
"Maybe it made Sasuke a slut, but if it did he was in slut heaven."
"...unless Naruto was failing, vandalizing school property, or killing other students he wasn’t going to do anything about Naruto’s behavior."
"Come on, man law states you can NOT talk about NOT having sex while in a garage. It’s just… wrong."
They just made me ROFL.
Storyline wise, I was so surprised when I realised that Fugaku knew about his sons' relationship, but I thought it was good too, kinda made it me more interested in his past. Then when you add in that he has a past with Minato AND Naruto has an inkling about it...well lets just say, I will be craving an update!
I hope your muse is staying active for you!
~dusk.
ps. re your review of SOMH P2 "I was LOVING this so much and the smex was super hot... and then... STOP..." The stop kinda came because there was so much stuff that I wanted to put in (lordy, I'm rolling in ideas and need to do a bit of weeding ^_^;) and if I had put it in, then I would have been leaving loose ends if part two wasn't popular and I decided not to continue xD But since a few people have given positive responses, I will probably be continuing :)
Anyway, now that I had my revelation. I LOVE IT! Wow, it's sooo good. I love the way you write Naru's personality and attitude; it really comes across well. Him being totally into his car completely suits him. Also, I really loved seeing Sasu's more vulnerable side. When he started to cry I was totally like Awwwwwwwwwww, he needs cuddles! Or a good session with his men :P The dynamics between Naruto and Itachi are interesting to see too. Love Naruto's bossiness as a bottom -- its smexyyy.
Favourite lines so far:
"Maybe it made Sasuke a slut, but if it did he was in slut heaven."
"...unless Naruto was failing, vandalizing school property, or killing other students he wasn’t going to do anything about Naruto’s behavior."
"Come on, man law states you can NOT talk about NOT having sex while in a garage. It’s just… wrong."
They just made me ROFL.
Storyline wise, I was so surprised when I realised that Fugaku knew about his sons' relationship, but I thought it was good too, kinda made it me more interested in his past. Then when you add in that he has a past with Minato AND Naruto has an inkling about it...well lets just say, I will be craving an update!
I hope your muse is staying active for you!
~dusk.
ps. re your review of SOMH P2 "I was LOVING this so much and the smex was super hot... and then... STOP..." The stop kinda came because there was so much stuff that I wanted to put in (lordy, I'm rolling in ideas and need to do a bit of weeding ^_^;) and if I had put it in, then I would have been leaving loose ends if part two wasn't popular and I decided not to continue xD But since a few people have given positive responses, I will probably be continuing :)
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March 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my freaking Jesus that is hot!
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March 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Good stuff. Sorry I haven't given you more reviews. The action in this story is hot and sexy (and masculine, which is where many stories are sorely lacking) and the story itself is fast and fun, at least near the end.
The betas really helped. The first chapters were hard to slog though because it's obvious that you sat down and let everything just pour out (this is truly a case of the pot calling the kettle black.) The revised versions are much more readable.
The betas really helped. The first chapters were hard to slog though because it's obvious that you sat down and let everything just pour out (this is truly a case of the pot calling the kettle black.) The revised versions are much more readable.
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March 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
In my opinion, they came across as switches for one another, but tops with regards to Sasu. Can't wait to see if Naru can make Tachi scream when he tops.
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March 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Equal playing field and equally hot! Are we gonna get some Daddy action too? Even if its flirting and only mild it'll be a great addition in my opinion. I wonder when Minato and Fugaku's going to see the completed big picture. Can't wait for more as always!