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for Life's a Dance

by Xiophelia

schedule October 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
that was kinda quick end on Madara there. i was thinking it was gonna be drawn out..but i guess not. now the question is, who killed Madara?
schedule October 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow!! WTH??? How did Madara get killed or rather die? Did he poison himself for reasons we have yet to uncover? This is a very intriguing story and I can not wait for the next installment. Poor Itachi now feels the jealousy build up so maybe there will be some times when he can get closer to Naruto soon. But with all the stuff going on with his heritage, I don't know when that'll be.
schedule October 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh wow... that was really awesome. I like the end where Itachi was a bit unsettled with how Sasuke took over comforting Naruto. I am sooo glad Kyuubi wasn't some crazy murderer and I hope they get him out. I'm thinking though that maybe he is out and he's the one that killed Madara. That would be cool.
schedule September 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Cool!! I'm glad the possibility of Naruto's heritage is coming so fast!! I can't wait to see more of Kiba n Sasuke. I love when he's paired with others.:3
schedule September 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this!!! Well, I LOVE Itachi, so put him in pretty much anything and I'm happy, but this is really good. Neji's the one calling child services, isn't he? That bastard. He REALLY needs an Uchiha ass whoping!!!!
schedule September 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I wonder how Kiba is going to talk his way outta this. Woah, Ky and Kushina as sibs, that's a twist.
person Carousel
schedule September 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The story is getting so exciting. I can't wait to see the results of the DNA test.~
schedule September 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
that was so freakin' good!!!!! and I get the feeling that Sasuke has noticed that Naruto has some influence on Itachi but Naruto doesn't have a clue... I think that's awesome lol!
person cynaga
schedule September 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Fun and catchy. It's reading like a NaruxSasu so far to me though... *grins*
person Dorkchic
schedule September 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love that Itachi was going to deal with someone hurting his baby brother and that Sasuke found out. It will do him (them) some good to realise that even though he tortures him Itachi still cares about his otouto. It is also fun to see Naruto's slightly sadistic side planning to torment Kiba for his stupidity.