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for Life's a Dance

by Xiophelia

person Dorkchic
schedule September 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am hoping that Kiba is just intending for Hinata to be asurrogate. It does not seem likely since you generally do not go through the whole candlelit proposal scene when asking someone for that, but I am just hoping that Kiba is not as much of a bastard as I am thinking he is right now.
person cynaga
schedule September 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Your story grabbed me right away - lovely writing~!
schedule September 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay update... and a slightly happier Kono. On the other hand, Kiba you Dweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeb. What are you thinking dude. If you're making plans to get with Hinata for kids or whatever, you shoulda let your other half in on the deal.
person Carousel
schedule September 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much. I was wondering what happened to it the other day. I hope that Kiba was trying to propose to Sasuke and I hope that Itachi and Naru get together soon~
schedule September 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad to see you on!!! And I'm so glad you're writing!! I have no idea who could have made the false report... and snake man potentially a good guy? The world is ending lol.
person quittie
schedule August 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
the story is absolutely lovely! Would definitely be waiting for your updates. More power! :D
schedule July 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
sugoi nice story hope you update soon!!
person Cepheus
schedule May 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
that is really a great fic. i like the setting, though i'm really sad for poor Konohamaru, and i like how slow things are moving. the fact that there's good grammar makes it even better, i admit :D

also the characterization so far is really good, and i love how the charas interact with each other :)

the details on naruto's past, his friendship with sakura and sasuke... everything is really really good :D

so, thank you for posting this fic, i'll be waiting happily for another chapter :D

Cepheus
schedule April 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
<3
person Carousel
schedule April 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4 was fantastic! I love how Sasuke was being a good buddy to Naruto...but how will he react when Naru-chan and Tachi-kun start dating? :O