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by sameyler

schedule September 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
D: noo!!! sadface is very much my reaction. poor Naruto! Hope you update soon though if you're going to. I love this story
schedule July 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
wow really good story I liked it alot :)
person Bri4everyoung
schedule May 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
that was hot and i think sasuke and naruto really love each other oh yeah sasuke really did train that body and what was kakashi doing
person Jen
schedule December 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay, new chapter! Kakashi turned out to be a massive dick, and Sasuke is still a dick, but all in all, he was pretty forgiving about Naruto going out with Kakashi. (That's good since he shouldn't be 100% horrible, even if Naruto sees him that way.) But why won't Sasuke give Naruto a smidgeon more of what he wants? Doesn't it bother him knowing that Naruto is unhappy? He keeps saying it doesn't matter to him as long as he gets what he wants (Naruto), but after being together for years, Sasuke hasn't developed a bit of sympathy for Naruto? (If nothing else, it must make Sasuke unhappy that Naruto is constantly looking for a way out...?) Hmmmm... this whole time it seems that Naruto has been trying to leave Sasuke, or trying to date other people in order to break it off with Sasuke. But Sasuke has stayed loyal to Naruto--even though Naruto wished he wouldn't since he hoped Sasuke could find a new playmate. That's got to count for something on Sasuke's part? I'll look forward to the next installment to see where you take them from here!
schedule December 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
creepy... so is will Naru stop fighting... If he does Sas would let him go right?
schedule December 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Also a big fan of possessive sasuke! Please continue with it i love the whole I am addicted to you concept and that even though sasuke could have anyone he wants the geek curious as to why? The suspension is killing me! Looking forward to the next chapter. Amazing job so far:)
person xxKiuolo
schedule November 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is GREAT so far! It's really interesting to see the complexities between Sasuke and Naruto's relationship, especially in this chapter where time has taken taken its toll and made their relationship so unbreakable, in a sense.

I thought it was especially interesting, and more than a little telling, how the whole thing with Kakashi played out. It really shows how deep in Naruto is, having wanted to get away from Sasuke but ultimately being unable to due to how much his body needs Sasuke. Plus, what can I say? I'm a pretty huge fan of possessive!Sasuke. Haha.

All in all, I'm in love. Please, please keep up the good work! I really want to know what happens next!
schedule November 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke you meanie... you better almost lose Naruto someday and realize that you love him... then spend the rest of your life making him HAPPY to be with you *shaking a fist* or else!!!
person richon
schedule February 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like the idear, I am looking for more, will naru be able to find a way to escape?? please update soon
schedule January 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aww poor Naruto! Sasuke is a bastard... Heehee! I love bastard!Sasuke.