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Pls pair sasuke with neji. Live this story alredy

Gaara

Well, I vote for putting Sasuke with a woman because another male would feel like a (poor) replacement for Naruto, no matter who you picked. Changing the gender of his lover makes it much more difficult to compare the new with the old lover. So if it can't be Karin (after she walked away from him in the manga, I've actually found myself liking the idea of SasuKarin), then how about Hinata? She has a calm and quiet personality, which Sasuke would probably appreciate. And after everything he's been through, Sasuke deserves better than one of his fangirls. (But of course, if Naruto doesn't want Sasuke anymore, then you know Sakura--and Ino, but especially Sakura--would be first in line to pick up the pieces.)

This seems like it's going to be very painful. I liked how the first chapter ended. And with the second chapter I kind of saw that coming. But it's been 2 years! I like the Naruto & Itachi couple. Since Sasuke woke up calling for his brother and not Naruto I'm guessing that he doesn't remember Naruto? But that would be just as heartbreaking as him waking up and suddenly his boyfriend belongs to his brother. I feel bad for all 3 of them and just can't picture Sasuke with anyone other than Naruto especially since they were already together...how can anyone ever be as good? Kiba is the only one close to being loud, loyal, and aggressive like Naruto so it might have a similar feel for Sasuke...but he's still not Naruto!!!! sniff

The story is good...but I'm prepared to be weepy.

Thank you for another chapter and a review response.:D I like where I think your story is going. Will he have amnesia??? X3 I'm glad ur keeping this Ita/Naru and I would love to see Sasuke with Neji, please. That is a great pairing if Neji isn't too girlie.lol I can't wait to see what part Karin will play. Will Suigetsu be in this as well? Please give us an update soon?:3

Its perfect just as it is...

Thanks so much for the warning. I am glad you mentioned that this will be Itachi/Naruto only. I like this story, but I don't want to continue reading if Sasuke is going to be sad when he finds out the love of his life moved on with his brother and wants to stay with him after he finds out he's alive. I really mean no sarcasm, I am just a hopeless romantic and I don't like to read stories like that. I am not emotionally stable enough to handle the hurt that Sasuke's character is going to feel.

I love this story! It was so sad, but so good at the same time!
And i personally think that it's fine the way it is as a one-shot,
but as long as it ends happy, i think it would be good to continue :)
(I love happy endings :D)

the unmited possobilities of where this could go with Sasuke alive make me want to purr. It was beautiful smutty and completely lovely. You made me cry for Naruto in this. He broke my heart.

But I have to pose the questions. Who/what is in the grave? How is he alive and its unknown? I'm sure you've thought of ways around these questions... and honestly the answers to those would make me come back for part two as much as the promise of more great story! :)

Wow!! That was incredible!! I didn't think Naruto would go for Itachi cuz he'd just walk away when he was unSasuke like. Thankfully Naruto wanted to change what they were doing. It will be very interesting what would happen for Sasuke coming back and then this becoming SIN. I am not a really big fan of that but after reading the way u describe Itachi and Naruto's lovemaking, I would love to see this happen.X3 I hope ur muse just comes alive! I'll be looking out for it.^^