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wow! I am actually very excited about where this is going to go. I like the "elemental attraction" part of it. air and fire. they both need each other to exist. now, is it the same for sasuke and naruto?

I think it ended too quickly. But I am loving it. I love kitsune naruto! Heehee As for musey stuff you're welcome to email me any time. angeltalion at hotmail dot com

interesting so far... i'm curious about where you're going to take this

My God, but I love this story, please update soon! I've always been a fan of foxy Naruto.

This chapter was really funny. I was laughing outright through a lot of this chapter. Naruto in the dressing room scene was just hilarious. And Kakashi being so deadpan serious as he blamed Iruka for Sasuke being all paternal is a riot. I love this kind of humor!

I've begun reading Admitting the Truth too tho' I've only read chapter 1 so far. I like it too :)

You started well. The first chapter is a bit "ruffled" with some errors and some repetitions "Frustrated with his annoying teammate ...", "Frustrated the Uchiha threw himself..." and spelling errors as "eyes that where to extremely blue, to impossibly beautiful to be.." I started with some critiques (it's something at first glance and I'm not an English speaker), because I want to continue and finish this review with praises. The second chapter is really really good, and the story became more defined, the plot is tangible, and you described your characters so well. From my point of view,it isn't necessary to see more shippuuden, because you choose an AU anyhow. And you choose well. It is so entertaining and refreshing to read a bit angst and a bit of cuteness and humor... So, keep it going, and if some time you need help with an idea or you are stuck and your head is buzzing, well, ask and some of us, your readers will help.

This story is great. Think that it will he great once Admitting The Truth is finished! Maybe, just maybe-- you could add a bit of Mpreg? It would still be great once it really kicks off!

I'm excited and can't wait to see where you take this while I'm waiting for AtT

Nice. I like it a lot. Please update soon.

If Sasuke sees that, he's not going to get any sleep for months, years even... lolz.

Could you do me a favor, and email me when you update this story again! I'd like to be able to continue reading it. :D Thanks.

my email: demonchild352 @ yahoo .com

I haven't read your other stuff (yet) but this is just adorable! I love cranky obsessive Sasuke-in-denial and cute freaking out Naruto. Hope you write lots more!