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for Dial Tone

by antilogicgirl

schedule February 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You know what would just be awesome, if Kakashi were to show up at Iruka's house wearing exactly what he'd pictured Kakashi in!! I wonder how long it would take Iruka to realize it was literally a fantasy come true?!
schedule February 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Damn, that was some fantasy Iruka had! How I wish for an illustration of Kakashi in that getup tied to the headboard and Iruka riding him for all he's worth!
schedule February 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ok I'm confused was the whole thing with Kakashi just a dream? Part of his fantasy? Or did that really happen?

Either way I'm loving this story!
schedule February 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hahahaha I knew it!!!! I was not so sure after the first chapter but now I am!! Love it, love it, love it! Poor Kashi must have been hard to think that Ruka wanted someone else and he was so adorable asking for a date!! Anyway if I am wrong it doesn't matter, I'll still love it!!! xD I love this couple, they are so adorable together! Thank you so much for sharing, can't wait for next chapter, take care, XoXo. =)
person Ryu Earth
schedule February 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Iruka's fantasy was hot! O.O

And I'm really starting to think that his caller is Kakashi too! ^^;

But the ending, it seemed like it was at an odd place to end unless you didn't write the date. =/

Thank you for the update though! I am really looking forward to the next chapter!
person Vidori
schedule February 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, God is right, Iruka!

*fans self* Wow. Hot. XD
schedule February 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very good so far. Usually, I don't like this pairing, but you really made it interesting.
I love Sasuke in this. Bwa, ha, ha.
schedule February 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The different terms you have for jerking off are ridiculous XD I love it. lol@ Sasuke's attitude. Only Uchiha Sasuke will call a professor a moron like that XD
person Just_me
schedule February 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
LMAO! Seriously, Iruka, you idiot! Don't start talking dumb. XDDD
I'm soo curious what's going to happen next. Poor Iruka in a slump for not getting his nightly phonecall.
In general, moaners are horrible. Especially in the middle of the night. But it's a great subject to write about.
Great job. Can't wait to read more.
person RyuEarth
schedule February 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! *blushes*

I rather liked Iruka at the end of this (chapter, I hope!). He was so funny lol. And Kakashi's To Do list was priceless.

I hope that there is more to this! =)