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March 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
couldn't Sas let him train up an heir at least...
Naru cares about his village and it would pain him to leave it in the lurch like that.
as the song says 'not a bad oldbunch who live up here, but u know its not family and its not home.'
I think Naru will always miss his village a bit, sort of like a refugee or exile might miss home even if they can't go back.
Naru cares about his village and it would pain him to leave it in the lurch like that.
as the song says 'not a bad oldbunch who live up here, but u know its not family and its not home.'
I think Naru will always miss his village a bit, sort of like a refugee or exile might miss home even if they can't go back.
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March 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was wonderful. They were both wanting the connection and for awhile both were happy in their union. That was really good. Please post the next chapter soon.X3 Thank you.:)
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March 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was quite interesting. Naruto loved Sasuke but he wasn't desperate enough to give up his own dream, his love for his country, friends or his everything for him. He maintained his dignity. I love that about him.
I hope the next chapter will be up soon.
I hope the next chapter will be up soon.
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March 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow. . That was intense ! I am looking forward to seeing how Naru 's friends will react
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March 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
THere is something desturbingly perfect about this... and I have to be honest I'm not sure WHY I like this so much, but I really really am enjoying it. I think I feel like I should not like it because he's being held captive in a way Naruto can't break free and Sasuke is totaly mental and methodical in it... but its just perfectly done and facinating. Very wow.
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March 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! What kept Sasuke away for those few days? Will anyone try to get Naruto back? I liked the sake-influenced Naruto ^_^
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March 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love it~~~!
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February 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ooooooo I want to read more!!!!!!!!
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February 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
O: I'm absolutely craving more of this story, please continue it soon! D:
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February 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like this so far. I would have hit the back button if there was going to be rape, but it doesn't seem as though this Sasuke wants to take it there, which makes me breathe a huge sigh of relief. I'm also glad that Naruto recognizes just how messed up the situation is and why it's messed up. (I only wish the heroine of Vampire Knight were as smart as this Naruto is.) The tragedy of the story is that Sasuke could have had everything he wanted if he'd only asked Naruto for it, instead of forcing him.
So now Naruto has the problem of attempting to reason with a crazy Sasuke who genuinely thinks he's being nice and doing what's best for everyone... I think Naruto's strategy of trying to show Sasuke that he does want him back is a good one for now, but how far can he take it? Sasuke is crazy, after all; reasoning with him can only go so far. (BTW, if I read it correctly, when Sasuke asked Naruto why he'd waited to have sex, was Sasuke implying that he hadn't waited to have sex, but now wishes he had?)
About the ending to the story, I think a happy ending to me would be if Sasuke regains his sanity and Naruto is allowed to go home. A crazy Sasuke is sad and an imprisoned Naruto is sad. I don't know if they could have ever really found a way to be together even if Sasuke hadn't kidnapped Naruto (would Konoha really have been happy about its Hokage becoming involved with an enemy ninja?!) but now things have gotten that much more difficult. So I won't hope too much for a happy ending as far as that goes, but if at least both of their present conditions improve, I would be happy with it.
So now Naruto has the problem of attempting to reason with a crazy Sasuke who genuinely thinks he's being nice and doing what's best for everyone... I think Naruto's strategy of trying to show Sasuke that he does want him back is a good one for now, but how far can he take it? Sasuke is crazy, after all; reasoning with him can only go so far. (BTW, if I read it correctly, when Sasuke asked Naruto why he'd waited to have sex, was Sasuke implying that he hadn't waited to have sex, but now wishes he had?)
About the ending to the story, I think a happy ending to me would be if Sasuke regains his sanity and Naruto is allowed to go home. A crazy Sasuke is sad and an imprisoned Naruto is sad. I don't know if they could have ever really found a way to be together even if Sasuke hadn't kidnapped Naruto (would Konoha really have been happy about its Hokage becoming involved with an enemy ninja?!) but now things have gotten that much more difficult. So I won't hope too much for a happy ending as far as that goes, but if at least both of their present conditions improve, I would be happy with it.