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February 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love it. Keep it up, I look foward to a new chapter.
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February 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I was hesitant to start this, but I love your other work so I thought I'd give it a shot. I am completely caught up in it already. The pacing so far is lovely and I indeed want to know what happens next.
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February 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely lovely, I need more of this story. I would love to see it developed and drawn out to the point where they're both on edge, then break from all of the tension, though where ever you take the story I'm sure I'll love it just as long as you continue it.
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February 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awesome 1st chapter! Loved the emotional back and forth between the two... a lot of subtle touches that makes it a captivating read. Hope you update soon ^_^
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February 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was intense I feel really bad for naruto. This story has an interesting beginning I can't see the next chapter.
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February 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes!! Please post another chapter cuz I'm excited to see what happens next and if Sasuke will destroy the room or what cuz of his reaction to what Naruto said. Please see this to the end?X3
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February 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really like this one =) Keep it up.
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February 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This has promise =) I like this kind of detached Naruto that's making Sasuke really react...and Sasuke is kinda psycho
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February 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is actually a very intriguing concept. I do hope Naruto eventually grows to love Sasuke. Although, I don't agree with Sasuke's methods for insuring he has Naruto's undivided attention, I must admit that I can't wait to see how he progresses from here. And will the ninja of Konoha eventually realize that the Hokage is missing and they need to find him. How will Sasuke fight them all off if they do make an appearance? And at that point, will Naruto still want to leave Sasuke's side?
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February 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i really liked this so far. it'd be awesome for you to continue this!