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by djserani

person Althydia
schedule March 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very sweet ending. I liked the kids too (the spikes! XD).
It's also nice that everyone got their happy ending somehow, and to know what happened to the other couples. Thanks!
schedule March 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I wish I could hug you. This fic was awesome :D
person orchidna
schedule March 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was awesome. I don't think I've ever run across anyone else writing Kotetsu and Izumo so very close to the way I see them in my own head. *lol* And playtime with Genma and Raido... gah. Yum. I'm pleased to see Kakashi wasn't as difficult to pull the blinders off of as he could have been. As much as I like angst and such, I'm a sucker for a happy ending. :D I think I can sum my overall reaction to this fic up with a big ol' YAY!

I should go fave this on FF.N since I can't do it here. XD
person cynaga
schedule March 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Standing Ovation!~!!!

Now I am waiting for the sequel with Kakashi and Iruka...
person tjrender
schedule March 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was a wonderful story about two characters that we don't hear much about---and you are among the very best at writing lemons, Serani---the passion comes off the pages in waves ! Formidable !
schedule March 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I read the new manga, saw Izu and Ko and thought of this fic XD ty for the update :P
person Althydia
schedule March 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
How cute... I'm glad they are finally together. I was starting to wonder if the story just wouldn't go in another direction...
Will we also see Iruka and Kakashi get together? After all, you've kind of built on their relationship too and I feel bad for them - Iruka now has a whole weekend alone (and maybe imagining what's happening between his ex-lover and Kotetsu at the same time) and Kakashi doesn't even know he's been dumped!
Anyway, not enough Izumo/Kotetsu stories out there - particularly when it's practically canon... So thanks for sharing!
person orchidna
schedule February 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Gah! as;dkfjaw;eifj;sdlkfj!!!!!

Excuse me for that. So many wonderful buttons are being pushed by this story that I'm having a hell of a time remaining coherent. *lol* (And that last sentence got corrected of at least fifteen distinct typos, even.)

The twists and turns this fic is taking are absolutely awesome. I was very happy to find two more chapters tonight on top of what I already needed to catch up with. XD Dear oh dear, what a fabulous mess these guys have gotten themselves into. So many tasty ways it could go from here... I eagerly await more. :D
person cynaga
schedule February 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
And the plot thickens! I vote for a foursome. Your characters are particularly sweet, you know.
person cynaga
schedule February 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I vote for a threesome... Delicious story!