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August 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
are the three of them going to be happy in the end? is the question i can't seem to answer
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August 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Hinata si so cute (naturally), but I also enjoy Sakura (and that's not so natural).
So, even though you are shipping Neji/Hinata (DIS-GUS-TING!!)), kudos to you for this story.
I hope this will be continued.
Stories like this one are the sole reason I visit this site.
I've no problem with smut, but I want a good story to go with it.
So, even though you are shipping Neji/Hinata (DIS-GUS-TING!!)), kudos to you for this story.
I hope this will be continued.
Stories like this one are the sole reason I visit this site.
I've no problem with smut, but I want a good story to go with it.
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April 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hope that ends as a naruto/sakura/hinata, so all of them be happy because sakura and hinata are already in a taboo relationshift so be with naruto won't be strange
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April 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Looks very interesting, will sakura realize what she is doing to naruto and if hinata still have fellings for naruto would not be better that the 3 of them be togethers after all they already are broken a taboo by be together hinata and sakura
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March 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story has got my attenion to the point where I have to know how this will play out at this point
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February 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very well done. With this chapter, Sakura and especially Hinata, are really coming to life as characters. The lemon was spot-on, IMHO. An excellent balance between what's happening *to* Hinata and what's happening *inside* her (no pun intended). I strongly urge you to continue this story to it's conclusion. It sounds like it's going to be a winner.
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February 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I guess this emans that naruto lost his chance with any of them does it?
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February 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I thought that's where this might lead to. It will be interesting to see how you get Mister "I'm an Avenger" into the mood for love.
Good stuff. I love it when a plan comes together...and a cherry blossom falls apart.
Good stuff. I love it when a plan comes together...and a cherry blossom falls apart.
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February 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
not a bad story, its getting interesting, i hope you keep going on it.
minor things bother me thou, the spacing of words is a little too much, its like 3 - 4 lines of wasted space, dont know if you did that or if its the site.
the chapters do feel a bit too short, both could have been in one, but like i said, im liking it so far and hope to see the rest
minor things bother me thou, the spacing of words is a little too much, its like 3 - 4 lines of wasted space, dont know if you did that or if its the site.
the chapters do feel a bit too short, both could have been in one, but like i said, im liking it so far and hope to see the rest
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February 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh no!! I hope there is nothing seriously wrong with Hinata. So none of the Hyuga like Sakura?