AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for What lies beneath Sasuke's Story

by asuka5271

schedule March 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I can't tell you how much I like this story! (this and the original of course) I like seeing Sasuke's side since we can get his thought process behind what was really happening. While I enjoy it, it also makes me a bit sad cause I know how it ends. Seriously, when I read the end of the first story I was all T_T crying my eyes out. Although I know it is a far stretch I really hope you add a little at the end to make it a kinda happier ending. Maybe they meet up in the afterlife? (or even more far fetched, Sasuke see's Naruto again the next year, or Naru gets sent back)<_<....Yeah thats never gonna happen. But maybe something a teeny tiny bit happier?

I swear I torture myself with these types of stories, I love them but they always make me sad.......which in some strange way, makes me love them even more. I can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!
schedule March 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Naruto showed up! I like the way you explained what Sasuke felt when he first used his powers. I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
person smint45
schedule March 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really like the backgroundstory you put in this!!!! Great idea with kakshi and obito and an massacare youur like thuchia massacare in the anime^^ I like this story!!! See you soon!!!
schedule February 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for trying to update on wednesdays, now we have that to look forward to every week, yaaay! I really like the way you explained the different levels of the Uchiha ocular jutsu, it's really creative. I look forward to see other things from the manga that you give other meanings for here.
person smint45
schedule February 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was really interesting!!!! Poor Sasuke doesn't know what he has coming!!! And he is so exciet and happy and has tolift such a heavy burden!!! I Hope after this whole Naruto incident he will find somebody to be happy with!!! He has such a hard life!!! Thanks a lot!!! See you agiain!!!
schedule February 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nice work. I'm so happy that you did a little background on Sasuke and his little gift. I'm eager to read the next chapter!
person smint45
schedule February 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start!!! That answers quite a few questions!!! I can't wait for naruot and Sasuke to meet!!! Update soon!!!
schedule February 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is really good now i have to read the first part. lol.
schedule February 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this story and its prequeal, although beautiful, are heartbreakingly sad! You have written a story where there is no way that the lovers can be together. no way at all. Naruto will show up at this house two months out of the year and no sane person will spend there life waiting ten months for a ghost to show up so they can spend a month making them fall in love with them just to lose them again a month later and start the process all over again in ayear. that would drive them crazy! and even if he did, sasuke would get older and older and whose to say that naruto would fall in love with the older, older, old sasuke. This is a wonderfully well written story. Very funny in some places and very clever with the plot twist but its such an impossible situation.