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by Prism0467

schedule September 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh come on!!!
how dare you leave it there!!
>:]
add more!
pretty please?
love it!

~Golden Kitsune~
person BatPhace
schedule February 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Dude I don't usually review, but this totally rocks my socks. Even if it is a NS. Your writing is awesome, perfect descriptions, and the reactions are totally in line :) Awesome awesome
schedule February 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
How the hell have I missed this when it was posted?

OMG. I missed your writing so fuckin' much.
schedule February 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
NICE! Very nice! I like this one!
schedule February 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was cute.^^
schedule February 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow...that was really sexy. I mean really really sexy. You gave the action & feelings & conflict of both Naruto & Gaara in a minimal amount of space and did an awesome job doing it. Why the heck haven't I read your stuff before this?