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person Miss Yato
schedule December 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I love it! I love the chapter, better grammar and spacing but overall a great chapter! I like it! 

 

person SD
schedule February 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Can wait for your next one since this was surprisingly good
schedule February 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'll give you an 'A' for enthusiasm but a 'C' for capitalization. What's up with that? It looks like you were writing it with one hand.

Sorry. Nevermind.