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for Festival Night on a hill by the leaf

by semetouke

person summerss
schedule June 1, 2017 at 12:00 AM

very fun and sexy story.

schedule February 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
not a bad story at all, you might want to take another read thru it your self, some spelling errors required a 2nd read of a line to get the actual meaning, there were also some doubble or repeat parts of a sentence.

over all, a good story, personally i would like to see what happens next, if he got them pregnant etc etc, but that would mean this isnt a one shot but oh well.