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March 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is interesting so far. I love this pair so much. Can't wait to see more.
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March 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh loved this chapter so much!!!
please update soon :)
please update soon :)
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March 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very good start!! Looking forward to this story it sounds great update soon.
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March 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ok, Kiba's temper needs adjusting,lol. Hopefully it's not too serious for Sasuke and Tsunade won't kill him.XD I like Sasuke noticing little things Kiba does for him. I guess Sasuke will treat him differently although Sasuke didn't seem to mind Kiba being there like I thought he would.^^
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March 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Jen, favorite food/drink combanations rarely do make sense. If they did, they would be favorites of everyone, not just one person, so I don't think its fair to attack the food.
I too would like to see more talk from sasuke, but we have to remember his lack of trust and his rise in fear, I wouldn't be talking much either.
Overall, I love the story! I Like stories that show sasuke other than this brooding rock of doom, because thats not true to his character. He has other sides, he's just afraid to show them.
Please update soon!!
I too would like to see more talk from sasuke, but we have to remember his lack of trust and his rise in fear, I wouldn't be talking much either.
Overall, I love the story! I Like stories that show sasuke other than this brooding rock of doom, because thats not true to his character. He has other sides, he's just afraid to show them.
Please update soon!!
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March 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay, nice story :)
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March 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like this. Kiba is being surprisingly tactful lol.
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March 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
awesome chapter.... poor sasuke... i hope that he is going to be alright..... i cant wait to read more... please hurry and update as soon as you can
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March 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great story, i am hopping that this will be Kiba/sasu instead of Sasukiba, but its yours so ^^
update soon.
Do you have this story posted on ff.net???
update soon.
Do you have this story posted on ff.net???
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March 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
"Kiba shook his head. “Not problem Uchiha,” he growled out before walking inside and grabbing Sasuke a glass of tomato juice and a small bowl of cherry tomatoes."
That combination of food and drink sounded really gross. I know the whole point of the scene was that Sasuke was supposed to be impressed with Kiba for bringing him his favorite things, but tomatoes can't possibly be the only things Sasuke likes. I mean, ice cream might be my favorite thing to eat, but I wouldn't want to eat a milkshake and a sundae all at the same time, ya know? It's OK to go outside of popular characterizations of Sasuke (or any of the rest of the characters), especially when it makes sense for the story. As long as you get the personality right, as readers, we'll still feel Sasuke is in character even if he doesn't say "hn" all the time or eats something besides a tomato.
That combination of food and drink sounded really gross. I know the whole point of the scene was that Sasuke was supposed to be impressed with Kiba for bringing him his favorite things, but tomatoes can't possibly be the only things Sasuke likes. I mean, ice cream might be my favorite thing to eat, but I wouldn't want to eat a milkshake and a sundae all at the same time, ya know? It's OK to go outside of popular characterizations of Sasuke (or any of the rest of the characters), especially when it makes sense for the story. As long as you get the personality right, as readers, we'll still feel Sasuke is in character even if he doesn't say "hn" all the time or eats something besides a tomato.