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Please continue this, I think it will turn out to be a great story

Sasuke as this old, but childish vampire is incredibly cute, and very, very creepy. (At least that was how I read him with the pouting, calling Itachi "niisan" like a kid, and asking to "play" with Naruto. Itachi even spoke to him like he was speaking to a child. Very strange behavior that can't be explained by Itachi and Sasuke being lovers or brothers--or both.)

I would want you to continue this JUST for this character alone. Hell, you could toss Naruto and Itachi right out of the story and have it be only about Sasuke and I would read it. In just this little snippet he comes off as a super fascinating character. Is there a reason for his arrested development? Did something happen to him?

If I'm right and he's a little off-balance, then is the sort of character who's a lost soul and will always be that way, or would meeting Naruto help things fall back into place for him? Whatever Itachi is doing, and has been doing for the past 300 years, isn't helping any.

Ohhh what a tease! Its a little on the short side for a chapter. And yet you still have me wanting more dammit! XD

I really like the start of this!!! It would be great if you continued!!!

this is good please continue

TBC? Hell yeah TBC!!! You can't just leave this story unfinished, that would be cruel and I don't think you are a cruel person. Please continue!!

I'm not generally in favor of vampires, but as Sasuke and Itachi are basically the perfect vampire brothers there's really no way to dislike this- I can't wait to see where you go with it.
Happy hunting Sasuke<3
~Teal

At this point, there's not quite enough of the story for me to judge whether or not I'd be interested in seeing you continue, honestly. My motto on vampire fics is to approach them cautiously: They can either be a lot of fun, or rotting piles of emo. Your summary makes it sound like it might be a fun one? Sasuke as a 300 year-old vampire with a childish personality could be fun. So far, Itachi comes across like your classic dark, mysterious vampire, so it's pretty interesting that Naruto is going to end up preferring Sasuke (maybe because he has a kind of innocence about him?) Wonder if that would piss Itachi off? Unlike a lot of people here, I'm not into SIN, so it's good from my perspective that there's going to be a main couple. Well, those are my impressions of the story so far.

*Mews in outrage* That was just plain evil! Leaving such a teasing cliffie as that DEMANDS another chapter (or 20 heheee) at least. *Big kitten eyes* PLease add more, I love how this has started. And take your time on Reckless, we understand those silly fickle muses. If you need ideas, we are always happy to help. ^_~

You cant start something as hot as that and not continue...I hope to read more soon.