rate_review Reviews

I'm gonna be honest here because that's what all authors should want. I liked this fic and the plot was different, pairing perfect even though they weren't really together. What kinda had me go "Eh" was some of the dialogue and slight OOCness on Neji's part and that its kind of a cliffhanger even for a one shot. I was hoping there'd be more to really wrap it up. Overall what really matters is that I enjoyed reading this.

I'm in love with this story, I don't know how many times I've read it now, its just so deliciously gorgeous. Shika's my favourite character and I love how you portrayed him as been so much smaller, leaner and weaker than Neji, I only wish he had of been uke in this one, I can't help it I just love seeing Shika been dominated, lol. Neji's such a powerful man, so stern and forward, he's always struck me as being a large jungle cat, like a tiger, with his stealth and strength he makes a very sexy predator. It was so intense and a little scary to see him stalking the poor skittish Shika around their apartement, but I loved when he had him cornered at the couch with Shika unable to stop his advances, hehe.
Would you be planning on doing a sequel to this amazing story? Sorry I'd just love to read more and maybe see Neji been a little nicer to Shikamaru. This was a joy to read and I thank you very much for it. I have it saved in the favourites bar on my computer because I'm not sure how to fav it on this site, otherwise I definetly would. Thank you so much for this great read hun, your very skilled. Xx

You made me go from lol'ing, to squeeling in perverted glee, to AWWWWWWW, cute! All in one fic. I aplaud thee on a sweet one-shot. Great job.

''--a dream come true'' sounds about right!
Haha, and all Shikamaru had to do to make Neji pudding was to simply ask him out!
It was fun to see Neji change from the nagging business man into a flustered girl, haha.

Aww, kinda sweet and funny, but mostly damned hot!
I loved Neji's attitude when he was awake, and damn he is a heavy sleeper. Also, Shikamaru's character and physical appearance is quite lovely.

I hope you keep writing! Nice to see these fics from you!

yeah!

that was a great concept, and beautifully done.

thank you:)

awwww! *HUGS* I wouldn't call that non-con as much as dubious con since Neji made it pretty obvious he wanted to, what with man-babies and all. HA! I loved it!

Fucking amazing! Lol! I totally love you ClaireBear!

Wow! that was masterfully done. The whole scenario was wonderfully executed and I like what you did with their character. This was a good piece. I would love to see more from you.

"Im pregnant and I may go into labor soon" roflmao! That was hilarious. Great story. I love this pairing and I wish there were more stories with them in it.

WOW!

I don't condone non-con either, but your story is well-written and compelling. It's definitely a breed apart from the typical cliche themes. You get extra points for:

* The pairing. I FREAKING ADORE Neji x Shikamaru (or in this case, Shikamaru x Neji).

* Turning the lemon of having a tiny penis into the best batch of lemonade imaginable.

* Neji giving Shikamaru head, and then riding him to completion, while sleepwalking. Bonus points here!

* Using the term 'zombie apocalypse' in legitimate context.

I AM IN AWE. GO ON WITH YOUR BAD SELF!