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by Tomcat171

schedule June 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Although some parts are a little hard to understand and wordy (especially at the beginning), once you get your rhythm down, the rest of it is downright poetic and beautiful at times. The imagery and use of metaphor mesmerizing. Stunning and SUPER sexy! I haven't seen the act of sex described so poetically and marvelously before.
schedule June 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love it. Please keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next chapter
schedule June 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was good. Just, wow. That's all I can say about that.
schedule February 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love the story, not many authors can write short "one shot's" without them comming across as just plain smut, this is one of the few that sounds like it could be completely true, causes real emotional responses and almost makes you forget its not you in the story, more please :)