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by AngelTalion

person Chloe
schedule June 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Loving this very much! Craving more. :)
schedule August 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey!! I hope this is where you meant by "BOUND Board".
I saw that you want "Broken Promises" Beta'ed. I haven't previously beta'ed for someone but I'm English and read a lot of books :)
Could I do it? Or do you already have someone? If not, how beta'ed do you want it to be? Just spelling or capitalization, punctuation, grammar and all that?
Please email ASAP. My email is on my profile. Thanks. :)
schedule August 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I did, actually, just post on here a few minutes ago, however I would like to tell you that I have changed my user name to fullyoukaivamp and will not be using this name anymore. but the email is the same :)
person silentshadow101
schedule August 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This story is awesome :)
person Mya416
schedule July 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So far I really love this story. Can't wait to read more. I like the fact that Naruto is still his strong self and you didn't turn him into a helpless character like I've read on in stories. I also can't wait to read what Itachi is going to do.
person Qjd
schedule July 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*blushes* fans herself, I do love a good Dom and Sub story. I really like the different angles you put into the story, showing the different levels of the bondage community. Not saying I am aware myself. But it's nice to read. Can't wait for more.
person Althydia
schedule July 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So many great things happened in this chapter! How exciting!
First of all, we learned more about Itachi and Deidara's relationship (I still don't understand why Itachi left Deidara behind the first time, though)... And they seem to be back together, yay! They are, right? Also, the Uchiha brothers seem to both have a taste for fiery blond men. Will we see Naruto and Deidara interact, since they are both bonding with Uchihas? I wonder if submissives talk about their Dominants with each other (are they even allowed to?), and how open they are about it...
Then there was the confrontation between Pein and Sasuke (so Pein isn't Nagato in this story?), and Sasuke finally admitted that he wants Naruto bound to him more permanently (at last!). I hope he'll discuss this with Naruto too because I'd love to know Naruto's reaction to this.
The confrontation between Sasori and Neji went probably better than Gaara expected, and the collaring ceremony was very sweet. The depth of feeling that Neji and Gaara seem to have for each other never ceases to amaze me... And I'd love to see Gaara pregnant with his devoted Dominant's baby. He would look so cute and I'm sure he has lots of love to give and would be a good parent. Also because it would be interesting to see how a baby is born and raised between a Dominant and a submissive, and if there are rules for that too.
I really loved the chapter and can't wait for the next one!
person richon
schedule July 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
love the way deidera demand his collar!!this story is awesome !! the plot is great ! I want more
person Analei
schedule July 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really love the complexity of the story coupled with erotic moments. I admit, I'm not a huge asuma/shika fan but I love too much about it to complain too much!
person tigoxgirl
schedule July 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I want to read more! I love how you write the characters and I'm interested in reading what happens between Itachi and Deidra! Of course I want to read even more SasuNaru, maybe a nice long scene for us? *gives puppy eyes* Onegai?

Hope to read more soon.

-tigoxgirl