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This is such a tease! I need more please....I'm practically drooling....

AH! How can I not speculate pairings with those little juicy hints you dropped?! I can't wait for more!

naru is a loud mouth but we love him for it. the training will be hot. love this story

PLEASE NO!!!!!!!!! DON'T END YET! I must....see.....more....blushing....submissive....Naruto.....! -dies-

I'm sorry it's too late, I've already made couple assumptions. lol I really liked this chapter cause things are beginning to move along. And now we know what happened between Naruto and Sakura. Gah! I'm so excited.

ja ne till next time and keep it up

I that was a good chapter. I wanna know what happens

yay update! their meeting was gooood lol i enjoyed and naru and itachi have had sex? :O wasn expecting that. i've never been fond of a gay shikamaru it's one of my pet peevs lol so i'm hoping that him sasuke asuma story thing isnt too much of an issue :s otherwise, still loving it, update sooooon!!!

Just when it was getting good!!
Please post soon!!

ur welcome. :) And there are some pretty big perks...like I get to read ur awesome stories first!

Good chapter, but there were some things I was a bit wary of - for completely personal reasons. I don't know how you'll develop the different couples yet, but to be perfectly honest I am slightly put off by a few little things. First of all, and for some odd reason, I have very specific tastes concerning Shikamaru - who is one of my favourite characters - and one of them is that I can't see him as a submissive, except maybe for Asuma, if they are paired together. For me he's an admittedly passive but not submissive person. Plus, I really can't see him with Sasuke. They just don't seem to complement each other, in my opinion, and it would seem particularly weird in your story. The reason is that Sasuke seems really intent on courting Naruto, and even though you've established that Dominants can have several submissives, Naruto, as strong and special as you've made him, doesn't seem like the type of submissive to share his chosen Dominant because he would be already a lot to handle by himself... What do you think?
The other little dislike was Kiba, as I also can't see him as a Dominant, except with Hinata (I can't take him seriously enough, I guess). I'm also very happy that Naruto and Sakura won't be together anymore.
Now these are just my personal tastes and you can of course write whatever you want in your story! They certainly won't stop me from reading it. :)
I'm quite curious as to how Naruto and Sasuke's relationship will develop now that they have finally met... And will Itachi be able to have Deidara? Poor Itachi shouldn't be alone (he has enough on his shoulders in canon already)...